Dove song on repeat

[Semicircle]

On a barbed fence
dark against opaque sky
beed crow eyes
glimmer

one caws, two caws
and the full cacophony spills over-
a mocking song
of forgotten optimism

the routine lyrics like rusted nails
slowly covered and uncovered
by martian soil
in disparate wind

alternative only to silence
and red lightning

[rowens]

A fence

crow eyes

glimmer,
caws

the routine 
only

to silence

and red




I made a horror movie out of this

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Poems need to say less than words until you have your own personal logic system.

Until then, what I made of your poem is what most readers will.


A vague O goshness