Music night

[CRNDLSM]

Thank you all for coming out tonight
Our first act is a real straight shooter
If you've seen em before you know I'm right
Of course all his songs are about cooter

Our first act is a real straight shooter
It's a country rock bar what do you expect
Of course all his songs are about cooter
Its only 15 minutes just wait whats next

It's a country rock bar what do you expect
The second guy will try and croon Sinatra
Its only 15 minutes just wait whats next
A solo electric guitar looped mantra

The second guy will try and croon Sinatra
There's lots more booze so we can all join in
A solo electric guitar looped mantra
A lady rappin a poem she wrote then

There's lots more booze so we can all join in
The fun goes on as more people sign up
A lady rappin a poem she wrote then
Random jams til we close, yup

The fun goes on as more people sign up
If you've seen em before you know I'm right
Random jams til we close, yup
Thank you all for coming out tonight

[rowens]

Is this one of those poem forms? 


The only poem form name I remember is Villanelle. And if you look it up, currently, it even has a picture of Jodie Comer. 




https://www.google.com/search?q=villanelle+poem&sxsrf=ALiCzsZCWGWY_bf-aS4SRIgZO9xBQZ07ow%3A1666875420996&source=hp&ei=HIBaY9TAOb-t5NoP0a6-sAY&iflsig=AJiK0e8AAAAAY1qOLA-ecnCXdBvcSyRsHAzz_xXwvwEH&oq=villanell&gs_lcp=Cgdnd3Mtd2l6EAEYATIICAAQgAQQsQMyCwgAEIAEELEDEIMBMgsIABCABBCxAxCDATIICAAQgAQQsQMyCwguEIAEELEDENQCMgsIABCABBCxAxCDATIFCAAQgAQyBQgAEIAEMgUIABCABDILCAAQgAQQsQMQgwE6BQguEIAEOg4ILhCABBCxAxDHARDRAzoICC4QgAQQ1AI6EQguEIAEELEDEIMBEMcBENEDOggILhCABBCxAzoLCC4QgAQQxwEQrwE6CAgAELEDEIMBOgsILhCABBCxAxCDAToHCAAQgAQQCjoHCC4QgAQQCjoKCAAQgAQQsQMQCjoNCAAQgAQQsQMQgwEQClAAWPAiYJgyaABwAHgAgAHVAYgB3wiSAQUyLjYuMZgBAKABAQ&sclient=gws-wiz

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Jodie Comer and her poetic form.

What is the name of this poem form you're using here? I've seen it before.

[Mark A Becker]

Good one C !
The rhymes cycle nicely, and resonate very well with the title/subject.
I’m not offering changes as these ‘puzzles’ are hard enough to solve.

Very cool beans,,
Mark

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What is the name of this poem form you're using here? I've seen it before.

Hi rowens-
RONDELET

[CRNDLSM]

This is a pantoum, I had it in a fun thread of someone else's but I wanted to search for it faster and so made it a thread now, that's the problem with practice pieces you want to keep, where did I put that sucker?

[Mark A Becker]

This is a pantoum…

NOT a rondelet- thanks for the correction C.  That’s what I get for sounding off before checking. Next, I’ll write a book about how smart I think I am. Of course, it’ll be full of retractions.

Apologies to rowens,
Mark