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Tiger the Lion Offline
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#1
08-31-2022, 06:09 AM
June was mere tinder

August burned like an O star--

winter is seething
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08-31-2022, 07:09 AM
(08-31-2022, 06:09 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:  June was mere tinder

August burned like an O star--

winter is seething

...and unlike a TV "season" which doesn't return after all the interesting bosses have been offed by incompetent writing, Winter is Coming is always a true statement.  Bad move, Burning August, to make him madder.
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08-31-2022, 07:27 AM
All of Europe is praying for a warm winter
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08-31-2022, 08:24 AM
(08-31-2022, 07:27 AM)busker Wrote:  All of Europe is praying for a warm winter

or Ukraine may die
or Putin may die
or the horse may learn to sing.
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#5
08-31-2022, 09:57 AM
(08-31-2022, 06:09 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:  June was mere tinder

August burned like an O star--

winter is seething

Quick suggestion 

Winter is steaming. 

Gotta go.  On the plane.
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