Eyebawl

[Semicircle]

Without skin 
and bone; naked
there– 
         still Watchin’


Eyebawl

[Tiger the Lion]

Without skin and bone
there–
still Watchin’


Eyebawl

I feel the mix of words here is kind of begging "naked" to be included somewhere. All of your nouns have a relationship to it. -skin, bone, eye

[Semicircle]

Without skin and bone
there–
still Watchin’


Eyebawl

I feel the mix of words here is kind of begging "naked" to be included somewhere. All of your nouns have a relationship to it. -skin, bone, eye

I shoehorned it, didn't see many alternatives. Hopefully it works.

Thanks tiger (: