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5 set
1 present
silver platter:
cold pheasant
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(06-06-2022, 10:00 AM)Semicircle Wrote: 5 set
1 present I like the juxtaposition of the 5 set one present. melancholy.
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cold pheasant
Hi Sc,
I like the feel and rhythm of it. It is subtle and I am curious about the inspiration.
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(06-06-2022, 10:00 AM)Semicircle Wrote: 5 set
1 present
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cold pheasant
I like the last two lines: they are a complete poem, like “petals on a wet, black bough”.
