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Hey, drivel dribble,
I scratch and I scribble,
The nib jumped over the blot;
The tense now and then
Went from whence to when,
And my pen ran away with the plot.
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Holy moly, I so thoroughly enjoyed this--particularly the final line. It took me by surprise and effectively added an even greater sense of whimsy to the piece. Well done, philip.
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thank you Joy for commenting and your encouraging words.
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Hi philip,
enjoyed the read.
Wondered why it was 'the nib' but 'my pen'?
Best, Knot
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Hello Knot,
Only just noticed your comment.
You 'wondered' ? - some things must remain a mystery....
Appreciate your encouragement...........P
