Puppies (A Boring Man on A Bus)
#1
Puppies (A Boring Man on A Bus)
 
 
Puppies 
            Puppies
                        Puppies
 
What’s that all about?
 
Puppies
 
kittens 
            rabbits.
 
 
This works
I can jump through a window!
 
I can jump through a window.
I can earn a crust, from that.
From jumping through a window.
 
—You said “I can jump through a window” too much.
 
—But I can paint a puppy.
It doesn’t mean anything. 
But I can paint a puppy.
It looks brilliant but means nothing.
I can paint a puppy.
It looks brilliant.
It means nothing.
 
It means nothing.
Looks good.
But means
nothing.
Looks good.
            But
                                    Means
                        Nothing.
 
Do you like it?
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#2
When William Faulkner originally wrote The Sound and the Fury, he conceived of it being printed in multiple ink colors. Since he was using multiple perspectives and flow of consciousness narration, he wanted each character to have his or her own color. 

Basically, I mention this to legitimize the following question:

“Can the puppies come in different colors?”

And yes, I do like it.

(08-06-2020, 07:43 AM)Exit Wrote:  Puppies (A Boring Man on A Bus)
 
 
Puppies 
            Puppies
                        Puppies
 
What’s that all about?
 
Puppies
 
kittens 
            rabbits.
 
 
This works
I can jump through a window!
 
I can jump through a window.
I can earn a crust, from that.
From jumping through a window.
 
—You said “I can jump through a window” too much.
 
—But I can paint a puppy.
It doesn’t mean anything. 
But I can paint a puppy.
It looks brilliant but means nothing.
I can paint a puppy.
It looks brilliant.
It means nothing.
 
It means nothing.
Looks good.
But means
nothing.
Looks good.
            But
                                    Means
                        Nothing.
 
Do you like it?
Reply
#3
(08-06-2020, 08:56 AM)Valerie Please Wrote:  When William Faulkner originally wrote The Sound and the Fury, he conceived of it being printed in multiple ink colors. Since he was using multiple perspectives and flow of consciousness narration, he wanted each character to have his or her own color. 

Basically, I mention this to legitimize the following question:

“Can the puppies come in different colors?”

And yes, I do like it.

(08-06-2020, 07:43 AM)Exit Wrote:  Puppies (A Boring Man on A Bus)
 
 
Puppies 
            Puppies
                        Puppies
 
What’s that all about?
 
Puppies
 
kittens 
            rabbits.
 
 
This works
I can jump through a window!
 
I can jump through a window.
I can earn a crust, from that.
From jumping through a window.
 
—You said “I can jump through a window” too much.
 
—But I can paint a puppy.
It doesn’t mean anything. 
But I can paint a puppy.
It looks brilliant but means nothing.
I can paint a puppy.
It looks brilliant.
It means nothing.
 
It means nothing.
Looks good.
But means
nothing.
Looks good.
            But
                                    Means
                        Nothing.
 
Do you like it?

Rimbaud used his vowels to represent colours.
Reply
#4
(08-06-2020, 07:43 AM)Exit Wrote:  Puppies (A Boring Man on A Bus)
 
 
Puppies 
            Puppies
                        Puppies
 
What’s that all about?
 
Puppies
 
kittens 
            rabbits.
 
 
This works
I can jump through a window!
 
I can jump through a window.
I can earn a crust, from that.
From jumping through a window.
 
—You said “I can jump through a window” too much.
 
—But I can paint a puppy.
It doesn’t mean anything. 
But I can paint a puppy.
It looks brilliant but means nothing.
I can paint a puppy.
It looks brilliant.
It means nothing.
 
It means nothing.
Looks good.
But means
nothing.
Looks good.
            But
                                    Means
                        Nothing.
 
Do you like it?

I said yes I will yes I ... zzzzzz
Brilliant

Let me clarify why it's brilliant.
It's not easy to write SoC material. 99% of the time it comes out as really bad poo.
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#5
(08-06-2020, 10:09 AM)busker Wrote:  
(08-06-2020, 07:43 AM)Exit Wrote:  Puppies (A Boring Man on A Bus)
 
 
Puppies 
            Puppies
                        Puppies
 
What’s that all about?
 
Puppies
 
kittens 
            rabbits.
 
 
This works
I can jump through a window!
 
I can jump through a window.
I can earn a crust, from that.
From jumping through a window.
 
—You said “I can jump through a window” too much.
 
—But I can paint a puppy.
It doesn’t mean anything. 
But I can paint a puppy.
It looks brilliant but means nothing.
I can paint a puppy.
It looks brilliant.
It means nothing.
 
It means nothing.
Looks good.
But means
nothing.
Looks good.
            But
                                    Means
                        Nothing.
 
Do you like it?

I said yes I will yes I ... zzzzzz
Brilliant

Let me clarify why it's brilliant.
It's not easy to write SoC material. 99% of the time it comes out as really bad poo.

Thanks you.
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