6-26-19

[Tiger the Lion]

a tardy summer
autumn steals its place in queue-
they'll war for August

[busker]

The guns of August, eh?
No specific feedback, other than that it’s not showing much

[Tiger the Lion]

The guns of August, eh?
No specific feedback, other than that it’s not showing much

you're right. it's not. 
I'm just annoyed that we had no spring to write about. Never trust a Canadian haiku. You never know when it'll turn on you.

[Seraphim]

I like concept, but not sure if personification works in haiku. So we’ll call it something else lol.

I see it as kind of a green leaf vs brown leaf thing. A lot of dead soldiers fall to ground, but autumn wins the war eventually.