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		Rules: Write a poem for national poetry month on the topic or form described. Each poem should appear as a separate reply to this thread. The goal is to, at the end of the month have written 30 poems for National Poetry Month.
 
 Topic 24: Write a poem using a line or portion of a line from Shakespeare as a title.
 Form : any
 Line requirements: 8 lines or more
 
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
 
		
	 
	
	
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		The ravell’d sleeve
 
 A bleak and rocky land, without a trace
 of shelter, comfort; just a rising road
 reminds it’s not my first time in this place.
 
 The last thing she was knitting, packed and stowed
 before dementia claimed her finally:
 a scarf for me. I finger it like code.
 
 Just plain, in rows, and anyone can see
 the missing stitches caught up wrong, or split,
 or slipped and dropped, to ravel endlessly.
 
 She sent a sweater once, that didn’t fit,
 one arm four inches longer than the other.
 My winter coat and gloves take care of it
 
 in this bleak rocky land without a trace
 of her who left me stranded in this place.
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		Lovely careful writting Mercedese, the end lines flipped me with that subtle shift in tone. Best Keith
	 
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		Here's the smell of the blood still.
 
 All the perfumes of Arabia
 will not mask the stench of this:
 Of burning black-smoke deserts,
 libraries of ash and tortured flesh.
 
 'Hell is full of good wishes, good
 desires', well this road you know:
 It leads from Nineveh, to Raqqa
 to Palmyra, to the Drowning Sea,
 
 to the unwelcoming heart of you.
 To your clean hands.
 
 
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		We Are Such Stuff as Dreams are Made Of
 
 He spoke, at first glance,
 as a member of a troupe
 of actors, characters, mere concepts
 playing on a little stage
 as dreams play in our littler heads.
 
 But Devil’s in that ‘We’ for,
 actor though he be,
 he also was a man:
 dreams were our only homeland
 in his head, as his in ours.
 
 Non-practicing atheist 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		But soft, what light?
 My hands sit on top of your shoulders like two dead parrots.
 I smell the lotion you use to soothe rough skin,
 bought at the grocery store, unmedicated.
 When the photographer finishes, my smile is real
 until the quiet drive home, night sky
 a sealed black eye, the stars
 lies my father told me, so I would go to sleep.
 Later, I'll sneak out, afraid to look up,
 my feet moving along a memorized route
 towards a light she left on just for me.
 
Time is the best editor.
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		All the Water in the Ocean
 The luminol is little help;
 
 it's all kiss and tell
 and kiss and tell
 when they use it on tv,
 
 but here and now with you and me
 it bites its tongue
 and will not sing--
 
 as if this
 one thing
 might best be left in Vegas.
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		04-27-2018, 04:20 AM 
(This post was last modified: 04-27-2018, 04:20 AM by Todd.)
	
	 
		Nothing Will Come of Nothing
 There is the nothing without
 and the nothing within—
 frost on the bones, and mist
 on the skin. The gray clouds
 have pushed the bird from its perch
 by my window, and the sky bleeds
 its solemn melody
 into damp leaves underfoot.
 
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		With mirth and laughter let old wrinkles come
 I remember the bounce
 of a bus ride into Liverpool
 and a rolling ferry that made me so sick
 I had to sit on his knee.
 
 My small fingers ploughed the fields
 on his potato sack face
 as he kept a weather eye on the Mersey
 and swamped me with his huge farm hand hands.
 
 I love you grandad I said, touching his cheek
 beneath a gaze that drifts towards an ocean.
 and there it was,
 a smile that fitted perfectly into
 every furrow on his face.
 
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		t´is one thing to be tempted
 and another thing to fall.
 yes you know it all,
 william, don´t you?
 tell me
 
 how forget the altitude?
 the gorgeous, tempting depths
 can be so terrifying
 from the edge, weighing, shifting
 feet on crumbly ground.
 
 tell me
 how to shed the doubts
 and calculations, futile as they are,
 when factoring fears.
 
 please tell me
 gravity won´t matter
 when i fall.
 
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		05-02-2018, 01:40 AM 
(This post was last modified: 05-02-2018, 01:44 AM by RiverNotch.)
	
	 
		What here shall miss
 for John
 
 
 To have died is a snake's breath,
 a burning cloud of poison quickly past.
 But to be dying -- planets
 pass as tears,
 liver ash -- lily bed --
 
 cancer,
 house of the moon,
 terminal,
 cupid's arrows,
 sores,
 
 and barely two hours traffic.
 
		
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