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That Carrolling Noise

That Carrolling Noise
dukealien Offline
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#1
02-04-2018, 11:14 PM
That Carrolling Noise

Snerk is an aborted chortle,
semi-unvoiced snark on thinking
something humorous that’s not so
brillig one may laugh out loud.

With appropriate hat tips and apologies to Dodgson!
feedback award Non-practicing atheist
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Wjames Offline
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#2
02-05-2018, 07:57 AM
Udder nonsense milk and chowbud, tasty!
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#3
02-05-2018, 10:48 PM
I like the idea of a Nabokovian crit all’s pale fire appended to Jabberwocky. I think you might keep at it.
A yak is normal.
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