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		Rules: Write a poem for national poetry month on the topic or form described. Each poem should appear as a separate reply to this thread. The goal is to, at the end of the month have written 30 poems for National Poetry Month. 
 
 Topic 07: Write a poem that starts at the end and ends at the beginning.
 Form : any
 Line requirements: 8 lines or more
 
 Questions?
 
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		Character Inversion
 So I unfold my shield of chaos
 and swirl with leaves
 where eddies end,
 cage each storm in a made up story,
 pestle my dreams in a mortar of friends.
 
 A clever chameleon
 only walks on black and white
 his tongue takes the snow flake,
 hides all day, awake all night
 roads are meant for crossing.
 
 Nerves that strobe through conversations
 tin foil rubbed on metal filled teeth,
 beneath the smile a whirlpool waits
 to swallow each day,
 the management of traits.
 
 By the time I realised
 the puddle wasn't deep enough,
 I was already diving
 A coiled serpent
 displaced inside a ripple,
 only going out to come back in
 shedding my skins,
 expressions I plucked
 to face northern winds.
 
If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		Aqueous Prism
 And you are my floater.
 My first dog Blackie floats
 and that body in the river floats.
 Long gone now, both my mother, father
 float.  What I look through to see the world.
 Whether I am aware or not,  I see the floaters
 No matter where my attention, where I look
 I find no aqueous humor in any of this.
 The doc said each may dissolve
 or dissipate with time.
 
 Suspended in the intraocular fluid
 dislodged from the inner lining of the eye.
 A floater is a piece of membrane.
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		(A bit of a cheat before I go on vacation. As I was writing something I kept hitting on themes I'd written about in a poem a few years back. I decided to rearrange the strophes and do some edits. I'll come back later and try something new when I return).
 When It Ended
 
 
 In the indistinct gray light,
 no particular bird was singing.
 
 Our kiss
 was like a postmark
 on a letter from people
 we no longer knew.
 
 I felt the itch
 of your lips.
 
 You spoke of that place
 you’d read about,
 something about mangos,
 some island somewhere,
 which you might like to visit,
 
 and then root canals and laundry,
 groceries and endless
 soccer games.
 
 We drank a tasteless Shiraz
 in that trendy café on Union,
 chewing words like stale bread.
 
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		'Tell me, which was it, the chicken or the egg?'
 As I finish off the keg
 philosophical questions
 only get stupid answers.
 Intelligence enhancers
 increase vomit projection.
 My brain or leg starts kickin',
 am I an egg or chicken?
 
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		Forward
 People assist each other in returning
 buildings to a state of disrepair
 until the tornado twirls by, placing tiles
 on naked roofs and stacking bricks with care
 into hallways. Street patrols moonwalk past
 windows where prostitutes press themselves
 to the glass. Urban renewal teams ensure
 the removal of toilets and other basic
 fittings. Residents forget recipes,
 erase menus. Places of worship close.
 People return to foreign countries.
 A train station opens. Books and water
 are removed from the library and bath houses.
 A train station is closed. Terraces fall,
 Crops spring back for a while, then shrink into
 seeds in dirt, behind a reversing plough.
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		The Healing
 
 Descent, rejoicing into Hell:
 healing wooden stake
 well-stropped green wood
 pierced unbeating heart
 just after sun’s true dawn
 forced cold quiescence.
 Wood, true death of trees
 old Aaron’s rod to contrary
 surcease of wicked immortality
 which lightly could endure
 lead, steel or bronze.
 Thus ending were-life
 long ago conferred
 by thirsty passion’s
 half-accepted, sharp
 love-counterfeiting
 tainted kiss.
 
 Non-practicing atheist 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		Trichotillomania
 I have a daughter who wore
 her mutilations openly
 on Sunday mornings.
 How is a mother to cover this up?
 
 She'd sit in the rocking chair for hours, slowly erasing herself,
 eyes empty, looking at nothing. At least
 we weren't fighting. At least
 she was focused on something –
 the girl wouldn't apply herself or finish simple tasks.
 That's not how I was raised, for sure!
 
 Her eyelashes were the last to go –
 they were the most painful; her eyes would water
 or maybe she'd cry, but what did she expect?
 Her thickening mascara helped her grip
 and slowly tease them out. If I were her,
 
 I'd rip them out quickly like a band-aid,
 but she'd take her time.
 If only she paid attention to what I say
 the way she paid attention to her disgusting habits.
 
 The eyebrows – oh the eyebrows! Half gone, half there.
 It's like she was trying to look ugly.
 
 A bald spot the size of a silver dollar
 appeared in one evening on the crown of her head.
 A headband couldn't cover it, and she never wore hats.
 Why would she do this to us?
 How was I going to explain this?
 I gave her a comb-over that is working for now, but
 I'm praying the wind is kind to us
 till this whole issue of hers has blown over.
 
 I don't know when it started. Tweens you know,
 they'll do anything to make your life miserable.
 Thank God no one else knows.
 
		
	 
	
	
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		Henrietta
 
 The end’s like knotting off a cotton thread;
 a length is finished, still the spool remains.
 I live on through my children, though I’m dead.
 My daughters have my lips, I smile again.
 Through each maternal ancestor a chain,
 our line unbroken since the first live birth.
 Our DNA, as memory, prevails.
 I never thought to travel round this earth.
 
 From Africa, where life began, we spread
 as servants, slaves, our treatment inhumane
 with hunger, floggings, hanging overhead.
 White masters took their pleasure in our pain
 and bred our daughters.Kings of their domain
 they knew exactly what our lives were worth.
 They farmed us, sold our children. Some were slain.
 I never thought to travel round this earth.
 
 Then slaves were freed, to own their own farmsteads
 and generations worked without complaint
 to own a patch of land, put up a shed
 and grow a crop to sell, somehow maintain
 a full-time job as well. Our pride shines plain
 in children reading, learning, giving birth.
 The Good Book teaches ‘Give, and you shall gain.’
 I never thought to travel round this earth.
 
 My cancer didn’t die with me. Mundane
 as my life’s been, I somehow earned rebirth,
 my stolen cells immortal now, arcane.
 I never thought to travel round this earth.
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		Regenesis
 Throbbing, throbbing, the sky was gone and dark prevailed.
 The All was bare. Just radiated stone.
 Then Providence! God’s unwinding spring had failed!
 Back again the flesh was brought to bone
 as time contracted ‘gainst the end he willed.
 Rushing in from outer void -- a moan
 both low and high. Terror. Even Nothing thrilled.
 Glowing matter hurled to the place
 from which it flew. Cold soil vapour spilled
 to earth, and water cooled down near it’s face.
 The flailing lash of Ra’d retracted back
 and brought again the halo out of space.
 The Halo, nebula of all that lived,
 compressed; a trillion sparks were born in black,
 burst and burnt away the haze, brought day
 trees, grass and breeze; Duat, loud roaring, pushed back!
 The firmament was blue again. Clouds took up their way.
 And in the kitchen, ‘round our table, we pray.
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		Power Lock
 They are always reliable
 half the reason
 is because they are yellow,
 magical force
 must be why they slurp back
 into their safe silver case,
 fast and sleek.
 
 I always take care
 not to rest my hand on the edge
 whenever I push the release button;
 a student in gym class
 lost her thumb
 (they sewed it back on),
 kinda being teacher's pet,
 helping mark
 the newly waxed floor
 for long jumps.
 
 I thought I'd be clever once,
 make an impression:
 pulled it all the way, twenty-five feet
 or more?
 I heard the spring give way,
 that doyang thang it does,
 then quiet, dead;
 
 It wouldn't retract,
 why should I be surprised?
 Yeah, he was watching.
 
 Clumsy wishes
 cannot give trapped springs
 back their power.
 I tossed it in a can;
 
 I should have saved it
 for a growth chart,
 or some other craft,
 
 like all the others
 I have never pinned.
 
there's always a better reason to love
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		scripture
 lamp oil comes out smooth --
 passing the tube, it gets to the blood
 and heals all ailments: blindness,
 bad shit, you name it! even sinuses clogged
 with mental matter. tastes fucking better,
 too, than all the guiltless: the heartburn's the something special
 keeping the bitter smell, the pungent taste, the smooth
 fresh in memory. only a meager forty!
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		I NEVER KNEW WHAT I WAS AFTER UNTIL AFTER
 Then after after passed,
 was after last exhale,
 was after broken pelvis,
 was after fell down stairs,
 was after when I woke,
 was after fell asleep with you,
 was after come inside,
 was after fell in love with you
 --Did I reverse the two?--
 was after found you in the sun,
 was after sleeping days,
 was after stay up all night writing lies and needs,
 was after hating poetry,
 was after learn to read,
 was after learn to speak,
 was after take a step,
 was after take a breath.
 
 P.s. this prompt threw me for a loop, Todd. Thx!
 
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		 (04-08-2017, 01:42 AM)Todd Wrote:  When It Ended   
		
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