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I Hate Haiku
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07-19-2016, 10:56 PM
Random abstract thoughts
will make meaningless poems, but at least it fits.
If you're the smartest person in the room, you're in the wrong room.
"Or, if a poet writes a poem, then immediately commits suicide (as any decent poet should)..." -- Erthona 
07-19-2016, 10:57 PM
that's not haiku!
which is kind of the point, isn't it?
07-19-2016, 11:01 PM
But what does it mean??
If you're the smartest person in the room, you're in the wrong room.
"Or, if a poet writes a poem, then immediately commits suicide (as any decent poet should)..." -- Erthona
07-19-2016, 11:03 PM
well don't ask me, i'm not your analyst. xD
07-20-2016, 11:49 AM
that's more senryu than haiku as it's of an abstraction and not an image.
i think your middle line proves the meaningless of the poem 
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