NaPM April 23 2016
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(04-25-2016, 05:23 AM)Todd Wrote:  Diamonds and Toads
 

Todd, 

I really like this one!
"Write while the heat is in you...The writer who postpones the recording of his thoughts uses an iron which has cooled to burn a hole with."  --Henry David Thoreau
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#22
TODDLER'S JOY

it's those pesky baptist virtues again,
turning every span of fun --
the crackle crash of crystal dish,
the spilling of the rice and fish --
into some catastrophe,

all my roofie contemplations
and ritual masturbations
becoming some sort of hook
to the dark side, to the pagan side --

yet is it really so dark at the surface?
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#23
@Qdeathstar.....kudos for writing a poem about getting a bowling pin stuck up his arse, personally I think there's room for a couple more, lines. Smile

If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out
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