Alien
#1
Congregated at this little bench,
we consume the unholy bread
and converse in foreign tongues
about our rulers and their laws.

Their ubiquitous regulations
discuss the imminent alien invaders
who will wholly inflict pain
with a banquet of opium spirits.
If you're the smartest person in the room, you're in the wrong room.

"Or, if a poet writes a poem, then immediately commits suicide (as any decent poet should)..." -- Erthona
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#2
(04-16-2016, 11:28 AM)UselessBlueprint Wrote:  Congregated at this little bench,
we consume the unholy bread
and converse in foreign tongues
about our rulers and their laws.

Their ubiquitous regulations
discuss the imminent alien invaders
who will wholly inflict pain
with a banquet of opium spirits.

Which is why I elude political discussion, especially when enjoying well crafted beers.
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#3
I have to say, I was really hoping someone would catch my intents with this one, as I felt it was obvious enough (except maybe the last line). It was written for my sister, based on a challenge she issued to me. I think it deserves some editing, as the symmetry is still a little bit lacking.
If you're the smartest person in the room, you're in the wrong room.

"Or, if a poet writes a poem, then immediately commits suicide (as any decent poet should)..." -- Erthona
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#4
It seems to be about immigration but it also reads quite overdone
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