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Tiger the Lion Offline
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#1
03-28-2016, 03:18 AM
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Leanne Offline
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#2
03-28-2016, 07:14 AM
I was going to say "you don't suck, you blow", but that's even more suggestive isn't it?

I'm left with an inescapable image of putting lipstick on a chicken.
It could be worse
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tectak Offline
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#3
03-28-2016, 07:25 AM
(03-28-2016, 07:14 AM)Leanne Wrote:  I was going to say "you don't suck, you blow", but that's even more suggestive isn't it?

I'm left with an inescapable image of putting lipstick on a chicken.

I'm no psychiatrist but I'd say you had chickenplex.
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jmmc137 Offline
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#4
04-01-2016, 01:18 AM
I looovee the alliterations. You can FEEL the piercing, and be lifted up by the pretty painting. The contrast makes it interesting.
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ThePinder
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#5
04-04-2016, 03:59 PM
Very interesting and enjoyable piece. The use of alliteration really makes you picture what's occurring.
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Erthona Offline
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#6
04-06-2016, 03:03 AM
Which came first, the cock or the egg?
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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