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" i'll shoot their heads
big holes and all
i'll shoot their heads
i'll kill them all "
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ugh, idk. fun picture took too much time from me though.
Here is a scene, of when I rose above the hearth,
when reapers eyed my lovely crown before the start.
I stood as oily bruisers do and feigned
the visage of their grace in fake Duchenne.
They pasted all the gore with rapine pride
to show that there was never any crime.
It can be said, that this is my behead,
beset on lacquered wood above the bed
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I think it's funny, but it isn't mattersome--are you wanting a rock-'em sock-'em pigpen edit, or are you happy with the thing?
A yak is normal.
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(02-12-2015, 10:51 PM)Brownlie Wrote: ugh, idk. fun picture took too much time from me though. Bandwidth or headtime? If bandwidth, I'll say
in my defense that I did reduce it from 300k to 60k;
if headtime, well... we all take chances.
(02-12-2015, 10:51 PM)Brownlie Wrote: Here is a scene, of when I rose above the hearth,
when reapers eyed my lovely crown before the start.
I stood as oily bruisers do and feigned
the visage of their grace in fake Duchenne.
They pasted all the gore with rapine pride
to show that there was never any crime.
It can be said, that this is my behead,
beset on lacquered wood above the bed Charming, especially
"It can be said, that this is my behead,
beset on lacquered wood above the bed
Had to look up "Duchenne"; I'd venture "  " isn't.
(02-13-2015, 06:32 PM)crow Wrote: I think it's funny, but it isn't mattersome--are you wanting a rock-'em sock-'em pigpen edit, or are you happy with the thing? I'm reasonably happy, though I love response.
I'm always hoping for parody, sincerity, or (best of all) both.
Explicatiously, the real question is: "Is she sincere?"
I think the using of "heads" instead of "them", and (especially)
that line two. The only decent valedictorian that would
use that construction is one that's mentally ill
(either that or an inchoate writer).
ray
P.S. As an inside joke (that has now escaped), that's a graduation
photo of Leanne. If she is the actual protagonist, then she is
quite sincere. But, knowing Leanne, the bodies are well hidden.
And, while she would be the obvious suspect, not a "shred" of
evidence would ever be found.
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(02-14-2015, 02:50 AM)rayheinrich Wrote: (02-12-2015, 10:51 PM)Brownlie Wrote: ugh, idk. fun picture took too much time from me though. Bandwidth or headtime? If bandwidth, I'll say
in my defense that I did reduce it from 300k to 60k;
if headtime, well... we all take chances.
(02-12-2015, 10:51 PM)Brownlie Wrote: Here is a scene, of when I rose above the hearth,
when reapers eyed my lovely crown before the start.
I stood as oily bruisers do and feigned
the visage of their grace in fake Duchenne.
They pasted all the gore with rapine pride
to show that there was never any crime.
It can be said, that this is my behead,
beset on lacquered wood above the bed Charming, especially
"It can be said, that this is my behead,
beset on lacquered wood above the bed
Had to look up "Duchenne"; I'd venture " " isn't.
(02-13-2015, 06:32 PM)crow Wrote: I think it's funny, but it isn't mattersome--are you wanting a rock-'em sock-'em pigpen edit, or are you happy with the thing? I'm reasonably happy, though I love response.
I'm always hoping for parody, sincerity, or (best of all) both.
Explicatiously, the real question is: "Is she sincere?"
I think the using "heads" instead of them, and (especially)
the line two. The only decent valedictorian that would
use that construction is one that's mentally ill
(either that or an inchoate writer).
ray
P.S. As an inside joke (that has now escaped), that's a graduation
photo of Leanne. If she is the actual protagonist, then she is
quite sincere. But, knowing Leanne, the bodies are well hidden.
And, while she would be the obvious suspect, not a "shred" of
evidence would ever be found.
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"i'll shoot their heads
big holes and all
I'll shot their heads
I'll kill them all.
For some reason this reminds me of the song "Hurt," as recorded by John Cash
My first thought, reading this and looking at the picture was, not if she gets you first, and then I realized it was her doing the talking
Your brother is all things evil,
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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(02-14-2015, 04:40 AM)Erthona Wrote: "i'll shoot their heads
big holes and all
I'll shoot their heads
I'll kill them all.
For some reason this reminds me of the song "Hurt," as recorded by John Cash " I wear this crown of thorns
Upon my liar's chair " - quoted from "Hurt"
" His swagger was as wide as the South, and he backed up every inch of it. "
- Some partially famous biographer, probably in the estate's employ.
(02-14-2015, 04:40 AM)Erthona Wrote: My first thought, reading this and looking at the picture was, not if she gets you first, and then I realized it was her doing the talking  I've revised it. I enclosed the verse in both quotes and italics to help
avert this confusion in the event anyone else should read it.
(02-14-2015, 04:40 AM)Erthona Wrote: Your brother is all things evil,
dale We are not the evil twins as surely as we are not the good.
This false duality is... wait did I just say false?
Damn, this Buddhist shit is harder (damn, there I go again) than I thought.
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"he backed up every inch of it." His hard drive?
"This perceived Cartesian mind body split..."
I became enlightened a number of years ago. It wasn't any fun so I gave it up. Do you know how much community service work comes with being enlightened? To top it all off, you become completely responsible for the fullest extent of your actions. It was spiritually incongruous to have to do community service and not be able to move. Infinite responsibility is no keg party.
Attachment should only be given up if you want to as much as wanting to breath when you run out of air. Other wise you'll begrudge the fact that you "had" to give it up. Siddhārtha told me that a long time ago. So far I haven't given up shit (which can get a little smelly) and I don't intend to give up anything until it quits being fun. At that time Gautama had already been reincarnated around 2000 times (did you know you can get reincarnated off the planet? Wild, eh?), at that time I had only been incarnated, of course the same is true today. Anyway Gautama had a lot more time wearing things out and getting tired of them. For me, everything was fresh and new and I wanted to try everything...well not goats!
Anyway, I heard I heard this joke you might like.
Question: what would it be if everyone drove a pink Volkswagen?
Answer: a Pink Car Nation. Ha! Put that on your lapel.
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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(02-19-2015, 08:11 AM)Erthona Wrote: I became enlightened a number of years ago. Many years ago I was working on the feed horn of an air defense (I was in
the U.S. Army) radar antenna when some fucking piece of unthinking dogshit
removed the giant red interlock flag and fired it up. I was, technically, sitting
in front of a 1,000,000 watt microwave oven. Luckily, I'd taken it apart enough so
it quickly shorted and destroyed about $60,000 of taxpayer money before it actually
had time to fry me. But for about one-half second the whole world coalesced into a sun.
Beautiful. Probably the closest I've ever come to enlightenment.
(02-19-2015, 08:11 AM)Erthona Wrote: Question: what would it be if everyone drove a pink Volkswagen?
Answer: a Pink Car Nation. Ha! Put that on your lapel. Question: What would it be if everyone drove a gray Volkswagen?
Answer: The Third Reich.
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