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Mosquito,
you flatter me;
mine is questionable blood.
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(01-07-2015, 11:55 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:   
Mosquito,
you flatter me;
mine is questionable blood.

Hi Paul,
I was kind of struggling to find the meaning in this and the best I had for a while was a possible reference to blood diamonds especially with the word 'mine' in there as well. But just this moment I've read the 'dubious' news and noticed that the lovely Lindsay Lohan is battling mosquito virus after falling ill on holiday in French Polynesia, the poor thing... the mosquito, that is. Am I getting closer to the truth???
Either way, I'm still looking at that word slap bang in the middle of your poem and thinking soon mosquito will indeed be 'Flatter'

Mark
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#3
TIC (tongue in cheek, with some false self effacement) I believe. Or ironic if you will.

Good one Paul. Good work resisting putting in "for" in line 2, it would almost be reflexive.

Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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#4
 Thumbsup Ha, ha... Paul, your rich blood is too good for the ungrateful parasite! Happy New Year/Chris
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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