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Arms Up, Don't Shoot
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12-07-2014, 11:16 AM
Arms up -
Raise your learning hand. Don't shoot - Praise the Son of man. Arms up - Grab what you can get! Don't shoot? Aren't you full of shit.
02-24-2015, 12:39 PM
I'm sorry I really believe you ahead a feeling that really gets lost very quickly. I'm sure this is related to the ferguson issue however I'm sorry to say left no direction or even created a feeling for what you were trying to convey, please note I mean no offence.
02-25-2015, 08:09 AM
This poem is too vague and without image or poetic technique for my taste, though it has a fairly good staccato rhythm. Thank you for the read.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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