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#1
08-29-2014, 03:17 PM



                old pond
                metaphor jumps in
                where's the haiku?
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08-29-2014, 04:38 PM
who's the metaphor
old pond
jump in
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08-30-2014, 08:00 AM
(08-29-2014, 04:38 PM)billy Wrote:  who's the metaphor
old pond
jump in

                old pond
                has
                jumped shark

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08-30-2014, 09:10 AM
old shark
metaphor jumps in
fin soup
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08-30-2014, 12:16 PM
old pond
polluted
teenager rolls eyes
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08-30-2014, 04:37 PM
old pond polluted
rich texan
shark metaphor
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08-31-2014, 12:29 AM

old texan
shark jumps in
smell of barbecue

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08-31-2014, 05:55 AM
armadillo chili
old texan
old pond
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08-31-2014, 05:57 AM
old armadillo
chilly pond
sound of shrinking
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08-31-2014, 07:09 AM

        old armadillo
        highway 290 about 20 miles west of Austin Texas
        sound of splating

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08-31-2014, 07:18 AM
(08-31-2014, 07:09 AM)rayheinrich Wrote:  
        old armadillo
        highway 290 about 20 miles west of Austin Texas
        sound of splating



HystericalHysterical

Edited -oooops-not fit for a haiku thread, sorry.
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#12
09-01-2014, 02:56 PM
(08-29-2014, 04:38 PM)billy Wrote:  who's the metaphor
old pond
jump in

who's on first base,
the metaphor is 'what'
the haiku is 'where'
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