...Go on Faith
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...Go on Faith

Scorched sand sizzled hot with a blister.
Rising heat sucked the air out the day
and the motionless sun like an unblinking eye
poked bones and my brains in its way.
I buckled to my knees from exhaustion
then my face hit the sand full flat.
Without water, each breath was a dry pain hurtin'
and my blood thickened more from its lack.

A pump handle shimmered in the day's heat
and I focused, crawling to it 'cross the land.
Hanging there was a sign, "Go North five feet.
Dig for water in a box in the sand."
Scratched eyes searched frantic for its pinpoint.
Charred fingers clawed the sand going deep.
As I dug with a frenzy, then I felt something hard.
Had I liquid for some tears, I would weep.

In the box, I found a bottle full of water.
"Don't Drink" said the jug's top sign.
"Pour half, prime the pump then wait five.
Pour the other half in, pump nine."
I blistered in my madness for the water.
Five minutes more of thirst was too great.
I twisted off the lid and I tilted up the jug
but those words "Don't Drink" made me wait.

After nine pumps, I fell against the handle.
Liquid sputtered then it spurted from the spout.
I was drenched and wallowed, bathed and swallowed
in water, sweet by words I rued to doubt.
And on the bottom of the bottle was a clear sign,
"Fill this bottle for the box, please do,
for the next soul searching for a Life-raft
who may have to go on Faith like you !"


Namyh
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#2
'Had I liquid for some tears I would weep' The imagery in this makes for great reading!
Thanks for this, a nice gem to read just before sleep.
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#3
This is a poem by Harry Hyman are you him? If not this is a plagiarized poem.

.................. Go on faith


© Harry Hyman, Oct 24, 2005
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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AliceW - Thanks for stopping in to enjoy. So very proud you deemed this a gem to read. Sleep tight and nitey night. Namyh

Erthona - Yeah, that's me alright. Spell Namyh backwards. It'll make you 'Go on Faith'. Hope you enjoyed this piece. Namyh
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Ah, you got me, the old backwards name spell. I never get that or acrostics, dyslectic you know. Well it's good to know you're still kicking. ...and yeah, it was a fun read.

Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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#6
didn't like the centre align, liked the poem a lot.
i wonder if anyone broke the chain. an enjoyable read.
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#7
billy – Faith is a powerful tool that’s ours for free. It’s something you don’t have to have an education to possess. Your social status is no badge that you’ve earned it. Your intelligence is no recognition that you’ve used it. It is best evidenced by the deeds it makes us perform, the character it molds and the sacrifices it makes us embrace. It’s even been known to ‘center align’ a person's character that’s become misaligned. Thanks a lot for stopping by and enjoying this piece billy. Namyh

Dale – Amazing how often we demonstrate Faith without thinking about it. We step on an elevator with a faith it won’t fall. We drive a car with the faith we won’t crash. We fall in love with a faith it will last and we go to work in the morning with a faith we’ll still be alive at evening. Faith indeed is a great philosophy for life, especially when everyday we’re gonna use it anyway. Good to know we’re both still kicking. So glad this was fun for you despite the ‘old backwards name spell’. Namyh
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