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unfinished ballad meter

unfinished ballad meter
Brownlie Offline
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#1
03-21-2014, 01:24 AM
When I slept I ate my dreams
And bid them all farewell
They fled me fast, they fled on past
And drowned inside a well

The presidents have sunken down
To wade as currency
They were taught, and they were tossed
Into a placid sea

What I bought was but a drop
A ripple and a thud
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#2
03-21-2014, 10:22 AM
it took all of them presidents
to buy a half a jug!
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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#3
03-21-2014, 11:39 AM
(03-21-2014, 10:22 AM)Erthona Wrote:  it took all of them presidents
to buy a half a jug!

Ha ha I like that, keepin it slant
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