"- Piccalilli on rye bread -"
#1
I quite like plastic sandals-
dick shaped candles
and big assed women in my bed,
I like artistic folks n artichokes-
n piccalilli on rye bread,
I like big gay men n Tony Benn
loud mouthed scousers and Steven Fry,
I like The small faces whisky chasers-
n come home Lassie - made me cry.



Perhaps this one is a little too "English" for some.
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#2
I really like this a lot. Good job.

It has humor in it, made me smile some.
I'll be there in a minute.
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#3
No such thing as "too English" -- especially when piccalilli is involved.

And Stephen Fry. And Small Faces. And... oh hell, I just really like this. Could maybe sort out the capital letters, but otherwise it's working just fine.
It could be worse
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#4
A fun poem to recite, thanks for posting it. Big Grin
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#5
Sorry, but this is just too English for me Smile


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How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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