Gothic Horrors
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It was 12 o’clock and All Hallows Eve;
those Gothic gals sure looked game.
One sported a long raven-black mane,
the other donned an ashen-blonde bob.
Some might say they seemed rather eerie,
yet seductive with their long pierced tongues.

Alabaster skin and blood red lips;
within my sites their canines gleamed.
Fools-gold dress and black-vinyl mini,
such cute outfits fashioned in Hell.
We got some stares; they winked full of glee
with eyes shadowed gun-metal blue.

The way they swayed; so serpentine,
quite the wicked erotic queens.
Just loved their fake photographed smiles
on their tightly strung silicon frames.
Their skirts rode high and I was hypnotized,
as they flashed their fresh Xeroxed tattoos.

I followed them home to their abode,
way on the other side of the tracks.
I only recall their glossy wax lips
pressed heavily all over me.
My mind a blur, I was feeling quite strange,
midst smokey-sage and rosemary fumes.

I woke up so sick, one exhausted fool;
my girls were nowhere within sight.
Waited all day, so impatiently.
Oh this dilemma I found myself in.
Quite unpleasant, shackled like this;
my poor wrists burned with much pain.

Cold and embarrassed without my clothes.
those hot Goth Chicks were so cruel.
Within my cage, all was going so dim;
in lonely retrospect, what did I do?
From all my friends, I’m gonna catch hell,
if these ghouls ever let me go home!
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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#2
I like it. It tells a complete story and shows very clear imagery. I think I met those two at a concert somewhere
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(10-11-2013, 07:20 AM)RyanRader13 Wrote:  I like it. It tells a complete story and shows very clear imagery. I think I met those two at a concert somewhere

Yes, they were fleeting fun!
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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#4
Thankfully I'm passed the stage in life that such girls would ever be interested in me! This seems to be non-rhymed accentual verse?

Happy Halloween!
Don't lose your spleen!



Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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#5
It's our interest in women of any flavor that can get us in deep trouble. Big Grin Two feme fatales might be curtains! Yes, it sings like some sort of blank verse, but I really can't do classic metrical forms. Cheers/Chris
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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#6
By the way, the dark one is bena!
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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#7
Curt and Rod may be where you hang those curtains Smile
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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