structured

[Bunx]

EDIT 1
There it goes up a massive structure.
Beautiful, it's assembled together,
bars raise up, a grid of trees.
They work in as one watching another.

Faces carved. Eyes sketched out.
Looking down at you, then about
the other folk, going through their day.
I wonder if these structures shout.

Thoughts these buildings must feel proud,
looking down not in awe of ground.
Once I saw a moss covered crow.
It dances here and there than found.

It did not move at all everyday
solely became a lie in May.
When I lost my eyes to the imaginary
I thought I may as well fly.

Structured.

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There it goes up a massive structure.
Beautiful, it's assembled together,
bars raise up like uniform trees. this line gives me trouble
They work in as one watching another.

Faces carved. Eyes sketched out.
Looking down at you, then about
the other folk, going through their day.
I wonder if these structures shout. You're personifying the buildings? Is this just for fun or are you trying to make us sympathetic to them? It's unclear as to whether I should laugh or not.

Thoughts these buildings must feel proud,
looking down not in awe of ground.
Once I saw a moss covered crow.
It dances here and there than found.

It did not move at all everyday
solely became a lie in May.
When I lost my eyes to the imaginary
I thought I may as well fly.

Structured.

Are you the crow? Or is... No wait I lost it. I'm sorry. This piece is cute, but a little elusive in some areas.

[Bunx]

s2 is personification. I work on the trouble line. i do admit when read out loud it sounds utterly strange. thanks for the comment news!