Falling (Song version )
#1
headset 
Falling


Capo 3rd fret
Am.........................................C..........Em
You're dancing barefoot in the morning dew,
to lose yourself in nature's waking call.
Garden freshness seems to breathe through you
and spiders spin their webs lest you should fall.
Bm..A.Em Bm..A.....Em
I’m falling, I’m falling

Its very simple this pattern then just repeats

Your lips sip water from a heavy flower,
that bows its head before it takes your hand.
The traces left by heavy summer showers
have given grace to eyes that watch you stand.

I’m falling, I’m falling

The moment breaks with noises in the street,
you turn your smile and see me move away.
The paving stones are patterned by damp feet,
that follow me to arms that hold your sway.

I’m falling, I’m falling

The sweetest rain taps windows once again,
our first embrace adds colour to the frame.

You're dancing barefoot in the morning dew,
to lose yourself in nature's waking call.
Garden freshness seems to breathe through you
and spiders spin their webs lest you should fall.

I’ve fallen, I’ve fallen

If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out
Reply
#2
I liked the song quite a bit. I wish you had posted the chords so I could play along as I have a tin ear.
Reply
#3
(08-11-2013, 03:28 AM)milo Wrote:  I liked the song quite a bit. I wish you had posted the chords so I could play along as I have a tin ear.

I have edits with the chords its very simple and just repeats. Cheers TOMH

If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out
Reply
#4
(08-11-2013, 06:38 AM)TimeOnMyHands Wrote:  
(08-11-2013, 03:28 AM)milo Wrote:  I liked the song quite a bit. I wish you had posted the chords so I could play along as I have a tin ear.

I have edits with the chords its very simple and just repeats. Cheers TOMH

found a capo and . . .go! I like it. Fun. You have that perfect accent for it too.

(08-11-2013, 02:52 AM)TimeOnMyHands Wrote:  Falling


Capo 3rd fret
Am.........................................C..........Em
You're dancing barefoot in the morning dew,
to lose yourself in nature's waking call.
Garden freshness seems to breathe through you
and spiders spin their webs lest you should fall.
Bm..A.Em Bm..A.....Em
I’m falling, I’m falling

Its very simple this pattern then just repeats

Your lips sip water from a heavy flower,
that bows its head before it takes your hand.
The traces left by heavy summer showers
have given grace to eyes that watch you stand.

I’m falling, I’m falling

The moment breaks with noises in the street,
you turn your smile and see me move away.
The paving stones are patterned by damp feet,
that follow me to arms that hold your sway.

I’m falling, I’m falling

The sweetest rain taps windows once again,
our first embrace adds colour to the frame.

You're dancing barefoot in the morning dew,
to lose yourself in nature's waking call.
Garden freshness seems to breathe through you
and spiders spin their webs lest you should fall.

I’ve fallen, I’ve fallen

It is probably just me, but I think there is a very strong chance this will get picked up by Summer's Eve © for their commercials.
Reply
#5
the guitar felt as though it overpowered the lyrics.
Reply
#6
(08-11-2013, 07:49 AM)milo Wrote:  
(08-11-2013, 06:38 AM)TimeOnMyHands Wrote:  
(08-11-2013, 03:28 AM)milo Wrote:  I liked the song quite a bit. I wish you had posted the chords so I could play along as I have a tin ear.

I have edits with the chords its very simple and just repeats. Cheers TOMH

found a capo and . . .go! I like it. Fun. You have that perfect accent for it too.

(08-11-2013, 02:52 AM)TimeOnMyHands Wrote:  Falling


Capo 3rd fret
Am.........................................C..........Em
You're dancing barefoot in the morning dew,
to lose yourself in nature's waking call.
Garden freshness seems to breathe through you
and spiders spin their webs lest you should fall.
Bm..A.Em Bm..A.....Em
I’m falling, I’m falling

Its very simple this pattern then just repeats

Your lips sip water from a heavy flower,
that bows its head before it takes your hand.
The traces left by heavy summer showers
have given grace to eyes that watch you stand.

I’m falling, I’m falling

The moment breaks with noises in the street,
you turn your smile and see me move away.
The paving stones are patterned by damp feet,
that follow me to arms that hold your sway.

I’m falling, I’m falling

The sweetest rain taps windows once again,
our first embrace adds colour to the frame.

You're dancing barefoot in the morning dew,
to lose yourself in nature's waking call.
Garden freshness seems to breathe through you
and spiders spin their webs lest you should fall.

I’ve fallen, I’ve fallen

It is probably just me, but I think there is a very strong chance this will get picked up by Summer's Eve © for their commercials.

Thanks Milo would love to hear your take on it, I will have to google Summers Eve not sue who they are. Cheers Keith

(08-11-2013, 08:59 AM)billy Wrote:  the guitar felt as though it overpowered the lyrics.

Thank Billy, that's what crap singers do, play loud then no one can hear the mistakes and there are plenty in this.Tongue

If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out
Reply
#7
(08-11-2013, 02:52 AM)TimeOnMyHands Wrote:  Falling


Capo 3rd fret
Am.........................................C..........Em
You're dancing barefoot in the morning dew,
to lose yourself in nature's waking call.
Garden freshness seems to breathe through you
and spiders spin their webs lest you should fall.
Bm..A.Em Bm..A.....Em
I’m falling, I’m falling

Its very simple this pattern then just repeats

Your lips sip water from a heavy flower,
that bows its head before it takes your hand.
The traces left by heavy summer showers
have given grace to eyes that watch you stand.

I’m falling, I’m falling

The moment breaks with noises in the street,
you turn your smile and see me move away.
The paving stones are patterned by damp feet,
that follow me to arms that hold your sway.

I’m falling, I’m falling

The sweetest rain taps windows once again,
our first embrace adds colour to the frame.

You're dancing barefoot in the morning dew,
to lose yourself in nature's waking call.
Garden freshness seems to breathe through you
and spiders spin their webs lest you should fall.

I’ve fallen, I’ve fallen

Not bad. Very Low-fi, which I'm not too fond of... But oh well. Anyway, I have a question. How did you upload your song on here? Did you link it from a YouTube video?

From,
Robbie Reaper
Reply
#8
(08-14-2013, 06:50 AM)Robbie Reaper Wrote:  
(08-11-2013, 02:52 AM)TimeOnMyHands Wrote:  Falling


Capo 3rd fret
Am.........................................C..........Em
You're dancing barefoot in the morning dew,
to lose yourself in nature's waking call.
Garden freshness seems to breathe through you
and spiders spin their webs lest you should fall.
Bm..A.Em Bm..A.....Em
I’m falling, I’m falling

Its very simple this pattern then just repeats

Your lips sip water from a heavy flower,
that bows its head before it takes your hand.
The traces left by heavy summer showers
have given grace to eyes that watch you stand.

I’m falling, I’m falling

The moment breaks with noises in the street,
you turn your smile and see me move away.
The paving stones are patterned by damp feet,
that follow me to arms that hold your sway.

I’m falling, I’m falling

The sweetest rain taps windows once again,
our first embrace adds colour to the frame.

You're dancing barefoot in the morning dew,
to lose yourself in nature's waking call.
Garden freshness seems to breathe through you
and spiders spin their webs lest you should fall.

I’ve fallen, I’ve fallen

Not bad. Very Low-fi, which I'm not too fond of... But oh well. Anyway, I have a question. How did you upload your song on here? Did you link it from a YouTube video?

From,
Robbie Reaper

Hi Robbie thanks for commenting see Billy's thread on posting audio poetry. I have used Kiwi6 for this one and my other audio posts. TOMH

How to upload audio poetry:
How to upload audio poetry to an online website and post it to the miscellaneous poetry forum:

You can upload it to youtube as a wmv file, or another file format acceptable to youtube. after that it's a simple matter of embedding the youtube video into a post. Creating youtubes can be awkward and time consuming, there is however a way to save mp3's to the web and simply hotlink the uploads to a post using the mp3 tags.

To upload your audio poetry, you must first upload it to an external site that gives access to your uploads via an mp3 hotlink. The one that we suggest is Kiwi6

Once on the home page of Kiwi6, register as you would on any other site and follow the sign up procedure. (it's free)

After you gain membership upload your mp3 file. After the upload is finished, copy the hotlink link and past it into your post like so



PHP Code:







Please post the text of your poem as well as the audio version.
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Poems posted must be your own work.

storage sites can lose, delete, scramble files, or ban you. It's up to you to save a copy on your pc or somewhere safe.

If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out
Reply
#9
(08-11-2013, 08:59 AM)billy Wrote:  the guitar felt as though it overpowered the lyrics.

I agree. I liked the song, would've been better if the voice overpowered the guitar or was of the same balance.
I once told this blond chick to screw in a light bulb..

She got naked and asked "how do I get in it?"
Reply
#10
(08-14-2013, 12:10 PM)R.C. KITCHENS Wrote:  
(08-11-2013, 08:59 AM)billy Wrote:  the guitar felt as though it overpowered the lyrics.

I agree. I liked the song, would've been better if the voice overpowered the guitar or was of the same balance.

Thanks RC I might have another go when I have more time, some poeple have said it needs to be lighter so could try doing both. Best TOMH

If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out
Reply




Users browsing this thread: 1 Guest(s)
Do NOT follow this link or you will be banned from the site!