Great Shakes Alive!

[James Willen]

To doze, to snooze, perchance to sleep.
Ah, there's the rub.
For in sleep what dreams may come
Must give us pause ...
As might fardels bear
From the whips and chains
Gone wild with a bare bodkin.

[Leanne]

Look, I don't mean to be rude but every way I look at it, I can't see how it's poetry to paraphrase (or plagiarise) Hamlet.

I am puzzled as to why you would bring this to a workshop, even "for fun".