Hallucinations

[furtherthanfurther]

you have become
the hope
in the corner of my eye
the face in the crowd
that disappears
on second glance
the default daydream
and you have
no idea

[Bunx]

i would have no idea you were not talking about a lost friend, if i had not read the title. i think this poem as development potential

[heslopian]

I like the vague, mysterious nature of this poem and how it conveys the object of its narrator's love as having an ephemeral appearance; one moment it's there, the next it's not. I kind of like that it's so short, too; it makes it feel a bit like a riddle in a fortune cookie. Thank you for the read