Poem done in Short Video Form

[nicnaimless]

Would love your feedback on the Poem as well as the video.
Thanks in advance!

[milo]

Brilliant!

[Rose Love]

That was great! Funny! And looked really professional!
Thanks for sharing it

Ok, well, since you asked for feedback, I will say that I was so taken in by the video and the quality of it that I didn't realize the narration was a poem. I thought the poem would start afterwards. I don't know if that's good or bad. I think it's an awesome video with awesome narration, whether you realize it's a poem or not.

[nicnaimless]

That was great! Funny! And looked really professional!
Thanks for sharing it

Ok, well, since you asked for feedback, I will say that I was so taken in by the video and the quality of it that I didn't realize the narration was a poem. I thought the poem would start afterwards. I don't know if that's good or bad. I think it's an awesome video with awesome narration, whether you realize it's a poem or not.

Thanks for the feedback. This is a new concept that we are trying. There are so many amazing poems that few ever get to hear because our society seems to engage video much easier.

So we make poem videos now. What poem would you like to done in short-form-video?