Who are you? Koo Koo? Koo Koo?
#1
Hey guys, I love the who and I think everyone is typically more rash then i am. simply because i take drugs to make me un-rash. with that said here we goooo!

GOO GOO
GAA.
Babies got more rhythm
then police?

Sessh, makes sense.
Police are going for singing,
yelling; making arrests.

"tell me about it!".

God, tell Me about it,
tits, they touch my junk.
Even, after i gave them
my stuff.

Police are nice, but
as absurd as sub-verse
rhyme.

"My dad is a cop."
said the girl from behind.

Girl, your dad is not bad
he is just paid
to blow minds.

I like mine.
Who are you?
A koo-koo clock?
Tik-tik-tik..
tok.
Only one thing is impossible for God: To find any sense in any copyright law on the planet.
--mark twain
Bunx
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#2
This reminds me a little of d a levy. I said that before about somebody's poem. You ever heard of him?
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#3
D.A. Levy? no i don't.. sadly, my knowledge of poets is quite primitive

(05-23-2013, 12:50 AM)Bunx Wrote:  D.A. Levy? no i don't.. sadly, my knowledge of poets is quite primitive


wait i may have heard. does he use alot of pop culture metaphors?
Only one thing is impossible for God: To find any sense in any copyright law on the planet.
--mark twain
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#4
He wrote in the '60s, and he talked a lot about tv and magazines and music. Lots of people did that. But some of the lines remind me of his. The line style, the words just a little bit. The talk about cops.
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#5
hehe you mean oinkers?
Only one thing is impossible for God: To find any sense in any copyright law on the planet.
--mark twain
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