1000 Miles

[matthewlightbody]

Just one breathe, you caught my eye
Dont know what you make me feel
Seems that you've shocked me with a spark
It's my heart that you appeal
I've never seen your face before
Or even held your hand
But we talk all night and share our songs
You just seem to understand
How can I feel this way?
When your a 1000 miles away
I dont think that it's possible
But it's here I wish you'd stay
It's a mystery to me, you see
Just how you can to be
But instead of dread, i'll just embed
Keep my focus straight ahead
Somehow you show me that i'm fine
And it's nothing left to fear
I try to show you my real side
This is more than it appears
One day we'll meet and that I pray
Is that you're really there
You give the hope and build me up
Fill my lungs back up with air
How can I feel this way?
When your a 1000 miles away
I dont think that it's possible
But it's here I wish you'd stay
I took this time in hopes i'll find
Searching hard here for a sign
Is this a crush? I feel the rush
You bring me color, paint from a brush
I can't believe it, guess your here
It's time we finally met
I don't know what to say to you
Seems you make my mind forget
I once read in a prophacy
That true love conquers all
A bridge of faith connects us two
Seems our paths broke down that wall
So yes, I feel this way
Even though your 1000 miles away
I know that we have hardly met
But, it's here I wish you'd stay

[Todd]

Matthew, you are allowed to post one poem a day in the critical forums, and only after you've critiqued in that forum first. Tell me which poem you want to save for today, and I'll save it. The rest will be removed. Please stop adding new threads. Thanks. /admin

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Hearing no response. I'll save this thread. I'll move it to an appropriate forum since no critique has been given. You are welcome to repost the other threads one day at a time./admin