Change Ling (One line at a time, you start. Strict rhyme and meter only)

[tectak]

in strict turns we change any line at a time but only one line per turn....am I making myself clear?



Of all the fish that swim the sea
The Haddock is the one for me.
You can keep your Cod and chips
for once a Haddock slips past lips
it’s praises you’ll forever sing.
On the other hand I quite like Ling.

Tectak
For fun 2013

[billy]

a sizzled cod upon a plate
a place or skate are just as great
a yellowed smoky piece of haddock
a dish well served by fanny craddock
none of these wonders can contest
the salmon fish cakes are the best

[Leanne]

The Ling go in the South of France
as codpieces fill underpants
le bon poisson, the ideal fin
de la journée -- but who'll begin?
Come back, ye haddock, you shall be
the perfect breakfast kedgeree.

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billy, I don't think we've quite got the idea of Tectak's rules... and I still don't know what he's on about!

[milo]

When billy stuffs his cod enough he
fancies he's a proper toughie
takes the kippers out to dance
in disco bars in southern France.
He acts the clown, the orange roughy.

eh, what is going on here anyway?

[tectak]

a sizzled cod upon a plate
a place or skate are just as great
a yellowed smoky piece of haddock
a dish well served by fanny craddock
none of these wonders can contest
the salmon fish cakes are the best

No no Children...listen up! One ling, sorry, line at a time. Are you listening at the back...billy, put it away until playtime. Right...I will start...
Of all the fish that swim the sea
the pollock's lost its deity.
You can keep your Cod and chips
for once a Haddock slips past lips
it’s praises you’ll forever sing.
On the other hand I quite like Ling.

See...one line at a time...any line. It must make sense, though. Of you go kiddywinks...

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a sizzled cod upon a plate
a place or skate are just as great
a yellowed smoky piece of haddock
a dish well served by fanny craddock
none of these wonders can contest
the salmon fish cakes are the best

.....jees! How dumb can you be...I try to bring these interesting little games to you all and NO ONE LISTENS. One line at a time.
Still , I like your poem Follow on to my start, first in first off. Start again! Stone the bloody crows!

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The Ling go in the South of France
as codpieces fill underpants
le bon poisson, the ideal fin
de la journée -- but who'll begin?
Come back, ye haddock, you shall be
the perfect breakfast kedgeree.

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billy, I don't think we've quite got the idea of Tectak's rules... and I still don't know what he's on about!

They're MY rules and if you don't play fair I'll squeem and squeem and squeem!

[tectak]

When billy stuffs his cod enough he
fancies he's a proper toughie
takes the kippers out to dance
in disco bars in southern France.
He acts the clown, the orange roughy.
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eh, what is going on here anyway?

Hey milo,
Your'e the first person I have ever heard make mention of orange roughy...except in Ireland. I used to buy a bloody great tangerine tranch of it every week from Howth near Dublin! Delicious!
Ah, memories.
Best,
tectak

[billy]

where does the one line begin from dearheart ? do we just add a line

[tectak]

where does the one line begin from dearheart ? do we just add a line

in strict turns we change any line at a time but only one line per turn....am I making myself clear?
.....or fuck it, I knew I was out of my element in this room...do you ever feel you just cannot cope with life?

.....I had a bad experience ce soir. I was hanging up a fresh washed pan onto my high hook rack and some water ran down my sleeve....I'll be OK.
Best,
tectak

[billy]

you can't be out of your element in the for fun forum you mullet

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in strict turns we change any line at a time but only one line per turn....am I making myself clear?



Of all the fish that swim the sea
The Haddock is the one for me.
You can keep your Cod and chips
for once a Haddock slips past lips
it’s praises you’ll forever sing.
On the other hand I quite like Ling.

Tectak
For fun 2013

Of all the fish that swim the sea
The mullet should be cooked for tea.
You can keep your Cod and chips
for once a Haddock slips past lips
it’s praises you’ll forever sing.
On the other hand I quite like Ling.

[billy]

Oh fuck your fishy-plated plea
The mullet should be cooked for tea.
You can keep your Cod and chips
for once a Haddock slips past lips
it’s praises you’ll forever sing.
On the other hand I quite like Ling

[tectak]

Oh fuck your fishy-plated plea
The mullet should be cooked for tea.
You can keep your Cod and chips
for once a Haddock slips past lips
it’s praises you’ll forever sing.
I don't like tea, I like gin sling.

See....very therapeutic. This could go viral

Are you humouring me
Best,
tectak

[billy]

Oh fuck your fishy-plated plea
The mullet should be cooked for tea.
You can keep your Cod and chips
for once a Haddock slips past lips
it’s praises you’ll forever sing.
but cook it well or watch your ring

no, i like the concept

[tectak]

Oh fuck your fishy-plated plea
The mullet should be cooked for tea.
You can keep your Cod and chips
finned food will not go straight to hips
it’s praises you’ll forever sing.
but cook it well or watch your ring

no, i like the concept

Phew! Got rid of the haddock in three iterations! Now to lose the cod!
Over.

[Leanne]

Oh fuck your fishy-plated plea
The mullet should be cooked for tea.
In finger form or battered strips,
finned food will not go straight to hips
it’s praises you’ll forever sing.
but cook it well or watch your ring

[tectak]

Oh fuck your fishy-plated plea
The mullet should be cooked for tea.
In finger form or battered strips,
finned food will not go straight to hips
it’s praises you’ll forever sing.
but cook it well or watch your ring

Oh yes! Awsome and wow! (permitted here as it is only a game) It is getting harder (ENOUGH, leanne) to find a way of sliding a just off rhyme in to morph away from what we have. Billy? strips, steps,leapt,.....

[billy]

Oh fuck your fishy-plated plea
i'd sooner have a beef entrée.
In finger form or battered strips,
finned food will not go straight to hips
it’s praises you’ll forever sing.
but cook it well or watch your ring

[Leanne]

"It's fish for tea again?" you say,
"I'd sooner have a beef entrée."
In finger form or battered strips,
finned food will not go straight to hips
it’s praises you’ll forever sing.
but cook it well or watch your ring

[tectak]

"It's fish for tea again?" you say,
"I'd sooner have a beef entrée."
In finger form or battered strips,
finned food will not go straight to hips
it’s praises you’ll forever sing.
but cook it well or watch your ring

"It's fish for tea again?" you say,
"I'd sooner have a beef entrée."
In finger form or battered strips,
finned food will not go straight to hips
boeuf,au contra, has horse mixed in
but cook it well or watch your ring
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[Leanne]

"It's fish for tea again?" you say,
"I'd sooner have a beef entrée."
In finger form or battered strips,
finned food will not go straight to hips
boeuf,au contra, has horse mixed in:
that casserole is 10 to 1 to win.

[tectak]

"It's fish for tea again?" you say,
"I'd sooner have a beef entrée."
In finger form or battered strips,
finned food will not go straight to hips
boeuf,au contra, has horse mixed in:
that casserole is 10 to 1 to win.

Aha! You're OUT!

Half a foot too long. Neh nehh-nny neh neh!

Leanne is out, leanne is out!