Short Poems by Jason Raffa

[JasonRaffa]

Is He?

Is He Anything Like Me?
Is He Everything you wanted me to be?
Is He Is He Loving You or Using You?
Is He Worth Me Losing You?
Is He Ready To Be A Man?
Is He Some You Are With…Just Because You Can?
Is He Someone You Want To Love?
Is He Just A Fling? Or…
Is He The Real Thing?
Is He?

[Todd]

Hi Jason,

This would be helped by some imagery, and at the very least a read through to catch your obvious mistakes. Read it though once out loud and you'll catch them.

Welcome.

Todd

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Oh, and I moved your link to your signature and removed it from the post (we don't allow them in the text of the post). No major issue./admin

[rowens]

This poem asks the questions that I ask every time I meet a girl. Don't have to have known of her but two minutes, I already ask these questions. At least to myself. But, then again, I want every good-looking girl I see. I reckon I need to take a bath.

I don't know if it all amounts to a poem. But then again I'm stone drunk.