< a wonderful life >

[rayheinrich]

< a wonderful life >

Solid iron primitive steel before they got to you you
so refined here you your face you using it as a brush
a pencil a stuttering picture movie manipulated freeze
frame slow motion solid iron never a thought of
fragile before it broke before you broke it me you
the pronouns started running personal a few
moments before this but
NOT fragile
NEVER fragile
a solid iron primitive steel before they got to you
so refined here you your face you using it as a
brush pencil pen stylus of moods manic multitudes
but never you never they never you as
manipulated freeze frame slow motion solid iron
never a thought of fragile before it broke before you
broke breakable before
me not YOU
me not YOU
iron primitive steel just you just a few
just a few moments before this
NOT fragile
solid iron before they got to you so refined here
you your face you using it as a brush painting
a brush painting: < a wonderful life >.

[newsclippings]

thumbs up. I genuinely enjoyed/identified with the read.

-S

[Heartafire]

Hi! I read this as a rant, the lack of punctuation and words seeming to trip over one another lend it a jarring quality, the repetition emphasing the message. I enjoyed it.
Cheers,
Heart