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#1
09-11-2012, 12:41 AM
Very funny limerick-style poemBig Grin The last two lines are clever and made me laffSmile One thing: the question mark in L3 should really come after L4. That tripped me up at first.
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billy Offline
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#2
09-11-2012, 02:19 PM
(09-10-2012, 08:30 PM)Fidofood Wrote:  The condom burst,
he feared the worst,
what was the cause
of this coitus pause?
A prankster’s trick?
Or a little prick!
why does it remind me of assange Big Grin
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#3
09-11-2012, 05:33 PM
I can already tell you'll be right at home here Hysterical
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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#4
09-12-2012, 12:43 AM
Hysterical

We've got a live one here Big Grin
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#5
09-12-2012, 09:06 AM
i just saw his avatar has a dogs head Smile
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