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- Loser (6 Replies)
- Kiting (edited) (14 Replies)
- Through the Layers (2 Replies)
- Fiddler Crab (revised) (4 Replies)
- Armagh (3 Replies)
- First Edit: Why We Fight/Aging (12 Replies)
- Mania (3 Replies)
- First Edit: poems (4 Replies)
- No seagull feel (6 Replies)
- Circumstances (4 Replies)
- Brisco Country Junior Cave's misadventures the rapeaing (2 Replies)
- No Sunshine. (6 Replies)
- Night Stories (Revision) (7 Replies)
- Murder Mystery edit (3 Replies)
- Four Years Old (24 Replies)
- Wet (5 Replies)
- After the Interview (4 Replies)
- Black Chalk - Edit2 (6 Replies)
- To the men (content: mild expletives, reference to rape) (3 Replies)
- A pocket full of field mice (6 Replies)
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