Oreo (haiku)
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fields asleep below
voluminous cumulus—
moonlit Oreo
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(09-29-2023, 01:22 PM)Lizzie Wrote:  fields asleep below
voluminous cumulus---
moonlit Oreo

The second line all by itself is worth the price of admission  Thumbsup

Took a moment to find the top layer (the chocolate cookie above the cloud filling)... it's the night sky, amiright?
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(09-29-2023, 09:44 PM)dukealien Wrote:  Took a moment to find the top layer (the chocolate cookie above the cloud filling)... it's the night sky, amiright?

You are entirely correct, Mr. Alien.
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(09-30-2023, 04:09 AM)Lizzie Wrote:  
(09-29-2023, 09:44 PM)dukealien Wrote:  Took a moment to find the top layer (the chocolate cookie above the cloud filling)... it's the night sky, amiright?

You are entirely correct, Mr. Alien.

I deduced you could see the clouds cuz there was a moon. But was still puzzled
about where the top part of the cookie was. Well, at least I got that far...
And I like to think I would have gotten the whole way but I accidentally read
the comment from our very own Deep Space Noble so I can't truthfully claim
intellectual competence. At least for this one.
And in addition to its appeal to inquiring minds, it's a good Haiku as well.
                                                                                                                a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions
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