A cinquain.
#1

Hookers
Meat for the tourist industry
Grinding out S.T.D's
Slot machines stalking the dollar
Needing
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#2
Ha. Loved the grinding out and slot machines imagery on this one Smile
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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#3
thanks for the kind words Smile
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#4
i just realised i screwed up on the form of this one Sad
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#5
I love the gritty sort of mouth-full-of-sand-and-rocks feel this gives off from the start. Although kind of gross and disturbing in it's imagery it's also very true and beautiful in it's own little bubble of grey. Fantastic job. Smile
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