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#1
The best poems are about
images.
 
There is no point,
except the feeling brought on
by the synesthesia of words
smells, sights, tastes, and sounds.
 
The moral of the story is sunlight
makes me smile.
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#2
Wjames , salut .

Inclined to agree that poetry may be sensation prompted with words .

But still less than certain sure .

Liked how you stated the proposal .

Respect jb aka hamlet13
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#3
This poem would work better if it had some synesthesia (typing that word on an iPhone is a frustrating experience. I had 'sundae is' and 'sand dunes' as suggestions) itself, to underscore the point.

But a good start.
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