Pic Poetry: Haiga.10/1/14
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[Image: madhavan_stormynight_zps3af4964f.jpg]
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(10-02-2014, 02:18 AM)Tamara Wrote:  [Image: madhavan_stormynight_zps3af4964f.jpg]

I like this, the separation of the lines made me put aside stormy night and see the other two lines. When I put the first line back again this really opened up for me into "no shelter".

I enjoyed the experience and find this a sound example of white space used beautifully by filling it with a distracting and beautiful image. Thanks for posting it, inspiring.
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Thank you. I am glad you found it inspiring. It was the tree that inspired me to write this. I clicked it on the beach during sunset and it was etched on the sky.
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I've got a similar view through my skylight, well, will by the end of the month, especially that gnarly one.
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