08-03-2014, 07:48 PM
Yes, this one:
(07-18-2014, 04:53 AM)Leanne Wrote: It kind of is a hijack actually, but it's quite fascinating -- Jake, would you mind if we shifted this entire thread to Poetry Discussion? Your acceptance of feedback has been so gracious, and the suggestions so interesting, that a lot of people could learn from this.The thread deviated substantially from the poem, but the deviations were worth keeping.
It could be worse
