Draft 5: Shell

Draft 5: Shell

alonso ramoran Offline

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10-09-2022, 05:04 AM

Knot, s3, ZHamilton,

Thank you for the feedback. Did a little overhaul of the second stanza, so I hope this works better.

Also does anyone experience spacing issues between lines when they try to do a full edit of their work? It happens all the time for me but with this edit it was so bad that I ended up having to delete the previous drafts.

Best,
Alex

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Messages In This Thread

Draft 5: Shell - by alonso ramoran - 11-04-2021, 01:22 PM

RE: Shell - by Wjames - 11-05-2021, 08:59 AM

RE: Shell - by Sapphire26855 - 11-06-2021, 02:36 AM

RE: Shell - by Beowulf - 11-06-2021, 05:27 AM

RE: Draft 2: Shell - by alonso ramoran - 11-11-2021, 12:00 PM

RE: Draft 2: Shell - by Knot - 11-12-2021, 09:21 PM

RE: Draft 3: Shell - by s3 - 09-09-2022, 10:53 PM

RE: Draft 3: Shell - by ZHamilton - 09-15-2022, 08:36 AM

RE: Draft 4: Shell - by alonso ramoran - 10-09-2022, 05:04 AM

RE: Draft 4: Shell - by Lizzie - 08-24-2023, 05:06 PM

RE: Draft 5: Shell - by alonso ramoran - 08-27-2023, 01:53 AM

RE: Draft 5: Shell - by Lizzie - 08-27-2023, 03:00 AM

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