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		<title><![CDATA[Poetry Forum - Intensive critique and workshopping]]></title>
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			<title><![CDATA[experimental poetry!]]></title>
			<link>https://www.pigpenpoetry.com/thread-27327.html</link>
			<pubDate>Wed, 22 Apr 2026 02:15:50 +0000</pubDate>
			<dc:creator><![CDATA[<a href="https://www.pigpenpoetry.com/member.php?action=profile&uid=10676">J.K. Solberg</a>]]></dc:creator>
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			<description><![CDATA[<ul class="mycode_list"><li>)pen the shades grey flowers are good by<br />
</li>
</ul>
       .<br />
      : see the now blue unset, red herlips on the hereyes<br />
     i am a mapleseedfalling goodbye<br />
    ; for tofall is tofly is tosayyouaremy<br />
  (<br />
       love<br />
                 ,<br />
<hr class="mycode_hr" />
Questions are welcome!  I know this is a very abnormal poem.  It's inspired by E.E. Cummings' style.  Thanks for reading and/or commenting!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<ul class="mycode_list"><li>)pen the shades grey flowers are good by<br />
</li>
</ul>
       .<br />
      : see the now blue unset, red herlips on the hereyes<br />
     i am a mapleseedfalling goodbye<br />
    ; for tofall is tofly is tosayyouaremy<br />
  (<br />
       love<br />
                 ,<br />
<hr class="mycode_hr" />
Questions are welcome!  I know this is a very abnormal poem.  It's inspired by E.E. Cummings' style.  Thanks for reading and/or commenting!]]></content:encoded>
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			<title><![CDATA[someday I'll be something]]></title>
			<link>https://www.pigpenpoetry.com/thread-27326.html</link>
			<pubDate>Wed, 22 Apr 2026 01:52:19 +0000</pubDate>
			<dc:creator><![CDATA[<a href="https://www.pigpenpoetry.com/member.php?action=profile&uid=10676">J.K. Solberg</a>]]></dc:creator>
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			<description><![CDATA[Someday I'll be something,<br />
Just today I'll be somebody.<br />
For tomorrow flits her glittered eyelids,<br />
and yesterday her 40 love stories --<br />
but you are a sunny somebody<br />
shyly shining through a simple something.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[Someday I'll be something,<br />
Just today I'll be somebody.<br />
For tomorrow flits her glittered eyelids,<br />
and yesterday her 40 love stories --<br />
but you are a sunny somebody<br />
shyly shining through a simple something.]]></content:encoded>
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			<title><![CDATA[Eden's sky]]></title>
			<link>https://www.pigpenpoetry.com/thread-27322.html</link>
			<pubDate>Mon, 20 Apr 2026 06:55:02 +0000</pubDate>
			<dc:creator><![CDATA[<a href="https://www.pigpenpoetry.com/member.php?action=profile&uid=10642">Rich Brown</a>]]></dc:creator>
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			<description><![CDATA[Soft leather.<br />
Breathless chants.<br />
You cradle your bible like a dying friend.<br />
<br />
I find you reading Genesis:<br />
If only I could take you there.<br />
In that garden,<br />
I will feed you every fruit from the tree of life.<br />
We can live forever, laughing and dancing past eternity’s gate.<br />
<br />
Reality falls from my palm.<br />
I stoop to pocket the universe,<br />
just to keep one memory of you.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[Soft leather.<br />
Breathless chants.<br />
You cradle your bible like a dying friend.<br />
<br />
I find you reading Genesis:<br />
If only I could take you there.<br />
In that garden,<br />
I will feed you every fruit from the tree of life.<br />
We can live forever, laughing and dancing past eternity’s gate.<br />
<br />
Reality falls from my palm.<br />
I stoop to pocket the universe,<br />
just to keep one memory of you.]]></content:encoded>
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			<title><![CDATA[ENGLISH]]></title>
			<link>https://www.pigpenpoetry.com/thread-27308.html</link>
			<pubDate>Thu, 16 Apr 2026 06:35:08 +0000</pubDate>
			<dc:creator><![CDATA[<a href="https://www.pigpenpoetry.com/member.php?action=profile&uid=10447">Michael Anon</a>]]></dc:creator>
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			<description><![CDATA[I welled up babbling from a rainground<br />
gurgling for my mother tongue <br />
under skyfather blue <br />
until I found among any-angle tangles of downstreams <br />
a brothertongue that swelled my wordhoard.<br />
<br />
After many wave copulations <br />
with an insult of parlances, <br />
and an overwhelm of loquacious coinings <br />
I became a rhythmic river <br />
echoing and rhyming down <br />
till I widened into Lake Lexicon.<br />
<br />
There I stilled a while <br />
for the fishing of new phrases in a lingua Franca <br />
where scriptures of river songs <br />
were sung and passed down <br />
to babbling babies <br />
to begin all again.<br />
<br />
This done <br />
my current carried barges burdened with <br />
tomes, testaments, letters and et ceteras<br />
in a joyful Babel<br />
till clogged up and bogged down in an estuary of low tidings, <br />
chatbot verbiage, emoticons and whatever <br />
I dragged<br />
all down<br />
to where all was<br />
merged <br />
mingled<br />
and <br />
petered out<br />
into<br />
an English sea.<br />
<br />
Then on the incoming tide,<br />
A bottle with a message in it.<br />
One day someone will find it and say:<br />
Look what I found: let me read it to you:<br />
“I welled up babbling from a rainground …..]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[I welled up babbling from a rainground<br />
gurgling for my mother tongue <br />
under skyfather blue <br />
until I found among any-angle tangles of downstreams <br />
a brothertongue that swelled my wordhoard.<br />
<br />
After many wave copulations <br />
with an insult of parlances, <br />
and an overwhelm of loquacious coinings <br />
I became a rhythmic river <br />
echoing and rhyming down <br />
till I widened into Lake Lexicon.<br />
<br />
There I stilled a while <br />
for the fishing of new phrases in a lingua Franca <br />
where scriptures of river songs <br />
were sung and passed down <br />
to babbling babies <br />
to begin all again.<br />
<br />
This done <br />
my current carried barges burdened with <br />
tomes, testaments, letters and et ceteras<br />
in a joyful Babel<br />
till clogged up and bogged down in an estuary of low tidings, <br />
chatbot verbiage, emoticons and whatever <br />
I dragged<br />
all down<br />
to where all was<br />
merged <br />
mingled<br />
and <br />
petered out<br />
into<br />
an English sea.<br />
<br />
Then on the incoming tide,<br />
A bottle with a message in it.<br />
One day someone will find it and say:<br />
Look what I found: let me read it to you:<br />
“I welled up babbling from a rainground …..]]></content:encoded>
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			<title><![CDATA[An English Patchword ( rewrite)]]></title>
			<link>https://www.pigpenpoetry.com/thread-27294.html</link>
			<pubDate>Sun, 12 Apr 2026 05:00:02 +0000</pubDate>
			<dc:creator><![CDATA[<a href="https://www.pigpenpoetry.com/member.php?action=profile&uid=10447">Michael Anon</a>]]></dc:creator>
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			<description><![CDATA[Cover me ever so quietly <br />
with a quilt of everything England<br />
A ginger-bread bed-spread <br />
With every coast and Inland.<br />
 <br />
A patchwork feast of fields and shires <br />
Boundaries and what-not-ments. <br />
Squares of cloth with lots of plots <br />
And patches and small allotments<br />
 <br />
Within it all those Tall Tales <br />
Woven well together:<br />
Green Men and <span style="font-style: italic;" class="mycode_i">grandes dames</span> <br />
All in an English weather. <br />
 <br />
A hunter and a runaway hare <br />
In brilliant broad embroidery<br />
Stitched and fixed higgledy-piggledy<br />
Needle-neat and orderly.<br />
 <br />
Piping boys and girls and babes <br />
Dressed in the altogether<br />
With John Keats among the pleats <br />
And dancing that goes on forever.<br />
 <br />
Knights on horseback, love in a haystack <br />
All their groaning sewn in,<br />
Grandfather clocks and Goldilocks <br />
In the house she's all alone in.<br />
<br />
Tea-cup spills and Welsh Hills<br />
Cat's hairs on the borders<br />
Cotswolds and blanket folds <br />
Disruptions and disorders.<br />
 <br />
Little Jack Horner there in the corner<br />
Rucked in and tucked up<br />
While Little Bo Peep has let her sheep <br />
Get all muddled and mucked up.<br />
 <br />
Tipsy maids in Gypsy Glades with <br />
Garlands on a Mayday<br />
Cats in hats with cricket bats <br />
And crones playing croquet.<br />
 <br />
A Brueghel scene you might have seen <br />
But never on a bed-spread: <br />
The heroes and the heroines<br />
From all the tales that you’ve read.<br />
 <br />
Simple Simon and the Pie Man <br />
The Jack and the Beanstalk peddler<br />
Who'll turn you into Puss in Boots<br />
A prince or Cinderella. <br />
 <br />
There's a stain on the pane where Sir Gawain<br />
Stands outside a dragon's den;<br />
And biscuit crumbs where Humpty comes <br />
With all the king's horses and all the king's men.<br />
 <br />
Cover me over with the quilt<br />
Quieten what I’m discovering:<br />
My adulthood stole my childhood <br />
And I am still recovering.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[Cover me ever so quietly <br />
with a quilt of everything England<br />
A ginger-bread bed-spread <br />
With every coast and Inland.<br />
 <br />
A patchwork feast of fields and shires <br />
Boundaries and what-not-ments. <br />
Squares of cloth with lots of plots <br />
And patches and small allotments<br />
 <br />
Within it all those Tall Tales <br />
Woven well together:<br />
Green Men and <span style="font-style: italic;" class="mycode_i">grandes dames</span> <br />
All in an English weather. <br />
 <br />
A hunter and a runaway hare <br />
In brilliant broad embroidery<br />
Stitched and fixed higgledy-piggledy<br />
Needle-neat and orderly.<br />
 <br />
Piping boys and girls and babes <br />
Dressed in the altogether<br />
With John Keats among the pleats <br />
And dancing that goes on forever.<br />
 <br />
Knights on horseback, love in a haystack <br />
All their groaning sewn in,<br />
Grandfather clocks and Goldilocks <br />
In the house she's all alone in.<br />
<br />
Tea-cup spills and Welsh Hills<br />
Cat's hairs on the borders<br />
Cotswolds and blanket folds <br />
Disruptions and disorders.<br />
 <br />
Little Jack Horner there in the corner<br />
Rucked in and tucked up<br />
While Little Bo Peep has let her sheep <br />
Get all muddled and mucked up.<br />
 <br />
Tipsy maids in Gypsy Glades with <br />
Garlands on a Mayday<br />
Cats in hats with cricket bats <br />
And crones playing croquet.<br />
 <br />
A Brueghel scene you might have seen <br />
But never on a bed-spread: <br />
The heroes and the heroines<br />
From all the tales that you’ve read.<br />
 <br />
Simple Simon and the Pie Man <br />
The Jack and the Beanstalk peddler<br />
Who'll turn you into Puss in Boots<br />
A prince or Cinderella. <br />
 <br />
There's a stain on the pane where Sir Gawain<br />
Stands outside a dragon's den;<br />
And biscuit crumbs where Humpty comes <br />
With all the king's horses and all the king's men.<br />
 <br />
Cover me over with the quilt<br />
Quieten what I’m discovering:<br />
My adulthood stole my childhood <br />
And I am still recovering.]]></content:encoded>
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			<title><![CDATA[Hagiography]]></title>
			<link>https://www.pigpenpoetry.com/thread-27280.html</link>
			<pubDate>Sun, 05 Apr 2026 01:31:30 +0000</pubDate>
			<dc:creator><![CDATA[<a href="https://www.pigpenpoetry.com/member.php?action=profile&uid=10102">thewilderhen</a>]]></dc:creator>
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			<description><![CDATA[HAGIOGRAPHY<br />
You have these dreary religionists<br />
and their lists of saints you go wading through<br />
to get to the good parts.  You know, I did my time<br />
of that in university. <br />
The part I liked was because I was nineteen<br />
and my professor had the Italian for many words,<br />
but dropped off forgetting at the English words ending in -y.<br />
This made the communication of ideas slow. Measured.<br />
Like a lecternist at the front of the chapel.<br />
<br />
Saints exist, if you let them. <br />
If you believe they are saints, then they are.<br />
Who is not to say that a saint called Teresa really did<br />
pack up one grey morning to trek across the French<br />
countryside and join the Crusades, as the story would<br />
have it, an infant girl?<br />
<br />
Well, saints exist if you let them, but for me the idea<br />
of a saint is hemmed in a little. Saints<br />
are for the people: when I was nineteen each region<br />
where I lived had its own, and each cause a patron saint<br />
alluded to, as if their mayors took lamp-black and fried it<br />
to get the inkiness out, then wrote the maps.<br />
<br />
But what makes a saint? I remember sitting with Kuya<br />
as he told me about the sin of drinking grape juice, which<br />
is like wine but not an effective wine for communion.<br />
I said I would have used the term productive.<br />
I hadn’t been drunk in almost a year, discussion<br />
of morals were easy for me given that.<br />
<br />
Sainthood is for the human, it’s not until later <br />
that the forms are cracked with whitewash. <br />
Kuya is fond of telling a story. People are, when it<br />
comes to the people whose sainthood they believe.<br />
A woman took Communion. She had sores, a soreness <br />
of gums. A middle-class afflicted woman.<br />
Did she have children this woman did her body<br />
in her starched black dress know what it was the Bible knew?<br />
I hadn’t been laid in a year, speculation was enjoyable given that.<br />
 <br />
In the video, she is alone.  Her children, if she bore<br />
them, are a generation removed from trying<br />
the saliva of the faith healer. These statements<br />
are not enough for sainthood: <br />
what makes a saint. Is it proof we are looking for?<br />
<br />
What makes proof - the video, I suppose. The woman is alone. <br />
The woman is taking Communion. A voice tells her sternly,<br />
swallow. The video frames jolt. Her face hides itself. <br />
Proof? The cameras have changed.<br />
More people have filled the frame -  a lace-<br />
bordered handkerchief swabs at her mouth.<br />
There is something grey in her mouth.<br />
The video starts again.<br />
<br />
True sainthood must need interpretation. Kuya tells me:<br />
What this woman has done is eat a portion of a human<br />
heart, but it started off as a Communion wafer. Kuya tells me: <br />
A+, male, thirties, the chewed heart beat its humanity encoded<br />
in by lab test <br />
<br />
<br />
He watches my face, ignoring my mouth.<br />
I think of the better ways I could fake it,<br />
camera as false journal for the soul.<br />
I think of being nineteen again<br />
I think, in the end (<span style="font-style: italic;" class="mycode_i">oh ye of little proof</span>): saints<br />
consume the people who believe.<br />
<br />
<br />
<br />
____________<br />
Another story-by-poem. What parts signify prose rather than poem and therefore should be reworked? What am I doing with line breaks? I do not know myself. Thanks for reading my opinions on saints.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[HAGIOGRAPHY<br />
You have these dreary religionists<br />
and their lists of saints you go wading through<br />
to get to the good parts.  You know, I did my time<br />
of that in university. <br />
The part I liked was because I was nineteen<br />
and my professor had the Italian for many words,<br />
but dropped off forgetting at the English words ending in -y.<br />
This made the communication of ideas slow. Measured.<br />
Like a lecternist at the front of the chapel.<br />
<br />
Saints exist, if you let them. <br />
If you believe they are saints, then they are.<br />
Who is not to say that a saint called Teresa really did<br />
pack up one grey morning to trek across the French<br />
countryside and join the Crusades, as the story would<br />
have it, an infant girl?<br />
<br />
Well, saints exist if you let them, but for me the idea<br />
of a saint is hemmed in a little. Saints<br />
are for the people: when I was nineteen each region<br />
where I lived had its own, and each cause a patron saint<br />
alluded to, as if their mayors took lamp-black and fried it<br />
to get the inkiness out, then wrote the maps.<br />
<br />
But what makes a saint? I remember sitting with Kuya<br />
as he told me about the sin of drinking grape juice, which<br />
is like wine but not an effective wine for communion.<br />
I said I would have used the term productive.<br />
I hadn’t been drunk in almost a year, discussion<br />
of morals were easy for me given that.<br />
<br />
Sainthood is for the human, it’s not until later <br />
that the forms are cracked with whitewash. <br />
Kuya is fond of telling a story. People are, when it<br />
comes to the people whose sainthood they believe.<br />
A woman took Communion. She had sores, a soreness <br />
of gums. A middle-class afflicted woman.<br />
Did she have children this woman did her body<br />
in her starched black dress know what it was the Bible knew?<br />
I hadn’t been laid in a year, speculation was enjoyable given that.<br />
 <br />
In the video, she is alone.  Her children, if she bore<br />
them, are a generation removed from trying<br />
the saliva of the faith healer. These statements<br />
are not enough for sainthood: <br />
what makes a saint. Is it proof we are looking for?<br />
<br />
What makes proof - the video, I suppose. The woman is alone. <br />
The woman is taking Communion. A voice tells her sternly,<br />
swallow. The video frames jolt. Her face hides itself. <br />
Proof? The cameras have changed.<br />
More people have filled the frame -  a lace-<br />
bordered handkerchief swabs at her mouth.<br />
There is something grey in her mouth.<br />
The video starts again.<br />
<br />
True sainthood must need interpretation. Kuya tells me:<br />
What this woman has done is eat a portion of a human<br />
heart, but it started off as a Communion wafer. Kuya tells me: <br />
A+, male, thirties, the chewed heart beat its humanity encoded<br />
in by lab test <br />
<br />
<br />
He watches my face, ignoring my mouth.<br />
I think of the better ways I could fake it,<br />
camera as false journal for the soul.<br />
I think of being nineteen again<br />
I think, in the end (<span style="font-style: italic;" class="mycode_i">oh ye of little proof</span>): saints<br />
consume the people who believe.<br />
<br />
<br />
<br />
____________<br />
Another story-by-poem. What parts signify prose rather than poem and therefore should be reworked? What am I doing with line breaks? I do not know myself. Thanks for reading my opinions on saints.]]></content:encoded>
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			<title><![CDATA[Longing Youth]]></title>
			<link>https://www.pigpenpoetry.com/thread-27277.html</link>
			<pubDate>Fri, 03 Apr 2026 07:05:50 +0000</pubDate>
			<dc:creator><![CDATA[<a href="https://www.pigpenpoetry.com/member.php?action=profile&uid=10104">Mic</a>]]></dc:creator>
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			<description><![CDATA[‘Don’t look directly at the sun’ <br />
went the advice to children in the summer, <br />
as over ancient roads they'd run, <br />
seeing who was faster. <br />
<br />
They would make it to the end and, <br />
having won the world, <br />
would stare up at unholy God <br />
and let their eyes be blurred. <br />
<br />
They would grow beyond their skin, <br />
let ego push them tall,<br />
they'd rip all muscle to stretch thin,<br />
only wither, weaken, and inevitably fall. <br />
<br />
Hobbling to their deathbeds, <br />
they’d pull the future close <br />
and with a smile, part. <br />
Wishing only to be less. If only they had the heart.<br />
<br />
<br />
<br />
<br />
the last stanza is clunky but it was the best I managed on my own]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[‘Don’t look directly at the sun’ <br />
went the advice to children in the summer, <br />
as over ancient roads they'd run, <br />
seeing who was faster. <br />
<br />
They would make it to the end and, <br />
having won the world, <br />
would stare up at unholy God <br />
and let their eyes be blurred. <br />
<br />
They would grow beyond their skin, <br />
let ego push them tall,<br />
they'd rip all muscle to stretch thin,<br />
only wither, weaken, and inevitably fall. <br />
<br />
Hobbling to their deathbeds, <br />
they’d pull the future close <br />
and with a smile, part. <br />
Wishing only to be less. If only they had the heart.<br />
<br />
<br />
<br />
<br />
the last stanza is clunky but it was the best I managed on my own]]></content:encoded>
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			<title><![CDATA[Draft 2 - Post Rain Crepuscular]]></title>
			<link>https://www.pigpenpoetry.com/thread-27262.html</link>
			<pubDate>Wed, 25 Mar 2026 22:54:15 +0000</pubDate>
			<dc:creator><![CDATA[<a href="https://www.pigpenpoetry.com/member.php?action=profile&uid=7885">alonso ramoran</a>]]></dc:creator>
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			<description><![CDATA[*based on feedback from thewilderhen<br />
<br />
<br />
<span style="font-weight: bold;" class="mycode_b">Post Rain Crepuscular</span><br />
<br />
<br />
This is not apocalypse. This is evening,<br />
parousia red,<br />
the longer waves surviving<br />
what is left in air<br />
of storm. Amaranthine waves, <br />
renewing vision with sorrow,<br />
fall upon us<br />
shadows now embodied, <br />
so blinded then <br />
as not to see the other<br />
and think,<br />
how beautiful<br />
how rare<br />
<br />
<br />
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Draft 1.5 - Post Rain Crepuscular<br />
<br />
This is not apocalypse. This is evening,<br />
parousia red,<br />
the longest wave surviving crimson<br />
past what is left in air<br />
of storm. The longest wave<br />
renewing vision<br />
with sorrow,<br />
waning into night,<br />
falling upon us <br />
shadows now embodied, so blinded<br />
then as not to see the other<br />
and think,<br />
how beautiful<br />
how rare<br />
<br />
Draft 1 - Post Rain Crepuscular<br />
<br />
This is not apocalypse. This is evening,<br />
parousia red,<br />
the longest wave surviving crimson<br />
past what is left in air<br />
of storm. The longest wave<br />
renewing vision<br />
with sorrow,<br />
falling, waning into night,<br />
upon us all,<br />
shadows disembodied, so blinded<br />
before as not to see the other<br />
and think,<br />
how beautiful<br />
how rare<br />
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[*based on feedback from thewilderhen<br />
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<br />
<span style="font-weight: bold;" class="mycode_b">Post Rain Crepuscular</span><br />
<br />
<br />
This is not apocalypse. This is evening,<br />
parousia red,<br />
the longer waves surviving<br />
what is left in air<br />
of storm. Amaranthine waves, <br />
renewing vision with sorrow,<br />
fall upon us<br />
shadows now embodied, <br />
so blinded then <br />
as not to see the other<br />
and think,<br />
how beautiful<br />
how rare<br />
<br />
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Draft 1.5 - Post Rain Crepuscular<br />
<br />
This is not apocalypse. This is evening,<br />
parousia red,<br />
the longest wave surviving crimson<br />
past what is left in air<br />
of storm. The longest wave<br />
renewing vision<br />
with sorrow,<br />
waning into night,<br />
falling upon us <br />
shadows now embodied, so blinded<br />
then as not to see the other<br />
and think,<br />
how beautiful<br />
how rare<br />
<br />
Draft 1 - Post Rain Crepuscular<br />
<br />
This is not apocalypse. This is evening,<br />
parousia red,<br />
the longest wave surviving crimson<br />
past what is left in air<br />
of storm. The longest wave<br />
renewing vision<br />
with sorrow,<br />
falling, waning into night,<br />
upon us all,<br />
shadows disembodied, so blinded<br />
before as not to see the other<br />
and think,<br />
how beautiful<br />
how rare<br />
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			<title><![CDATA[A Cheater’s Dance]]></title>
			<link>https://www.pigpenpoetry.com/thread-27251.html</link>
			<pubDate>Tue, 17 Mar 2026 07:28:32 +0000</pubDate>
			<dc:creator><![CDATA[<a href="https://www.pigpenpoetry.com/member.php?action=profile&uid=10422">ilovewomenandbeer</a>]]></dc:creator>
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			<description><![CDATA[Been working on tightening my imagery while keeping metaphors alive throughout a poem and not being cliché.<br />
<br />
Edit Revision(#1)<br />
<br />
<span style="font-weight: bold;" class="mycode_b">A Cheater’s Dance</span><br />
<br />
I just wanted a calm waltz.<br />
Lyrical lopes,<br />
my partner likes to krump—<br />
I don’t like it rough.<br />
<br />
She’s the world, I know,<br />
tempting, onlooking,<br />
wanting to truly waltz.<br />
<br />
Make dancing delicate again.<br />
<br />
Cinderelian ball—<br />
kissing, telling, and dancing—<br />
<br />
I lied about the tango,<br />
the delectable, unforgettable touch.<br />
<br />
I pursued, persuaded, and<br />
lied about my dance.<br />
<br />
Then guests knew—quietly.<br />
<br />
Kissing, whispering, and waltzing.<br />
<br />
Still, a bachata<br />
wouldn’t spin my world.<br />
<br />
Stuck between two spinning worlds.<br />
<br />
As for the restless confession—<br />
I’ll leave it on the cold floor.<br />
<br />
Alone,<br />
<br />
I’ll never know<br />
what it’s like<br />
to truly dance.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[Been working on tightening my imagery while keeping metaphors alive throughout a poem and not being cliché.<br />
<br />
Edit Revision(#1)<br />
<br />
<span style="font-weight: bold;" class="mycode_b">A Cheater’s Dance</span><br />
<br />
I just wanted a calm waltz.<br />
Lyrical lopes,<br />
my partner likes to krump—<br />
I don’t like it rough.<br />
<br />
She’s the world, I know,<br />
tempting, onlooking,<br />
wanting to truly waltz.<br />
<br />
Make dancing delicate again.<br />
<br />
Cinderelian ball—<br />
kissing, telling, and dancing—<br />
<br />
I lied about the tango,<br />
the delectable, unforgettable touch.<br />
<br />
I pursued, persuaded, and<br />
lied about my dance.<br />
<br />
Then guests knew—quietly.<br />
<br />
Kissing, whispering, and waltzing.<br />
<br />
Still, a bachata<br />
wouldn’t spin my world.<br />
<br />
Stuck between two spinning worlds.<br />
<br />
As for the restless confession—<br />
I’ll leave it on the cold floor.<br />
<br />
Alone,<br />
<br />
I’ll never know<br />
what it’s like<br />
to truly dance.]]></content:encoded>
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			<title><![CDATA[The Clockmaker's Joy]]></title>
			<link>https://www.pigpenpoetry.com/thread-27179.html</link>
			<pubDate>Sat, 28 Feb 2026 23:46:42 +0000</pubDate>
			<dc:creator><![CDATA[<a href="https://www.pigpenpoetry.com/member.php?action=profile&uid=7315">milo</a>]]></dc:creator>
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			<description><![CDATA[<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font"><span style="font-weight: bold;" class="mycode_b">The Clockmaker's Joy</span></span></span></span><br />
<br />
<br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">In the heat that’s dry and white like hay</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">the intolerable bright</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">of summer’s day</span></span></span><br />
<br />
<br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">and you - a sundial trapped within it</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">I beckon you to come away</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">and slip the minute.</span></span></span><br />
<br />
<br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">Without the metronomic gears</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">to click away the passing years</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">without the ticking panic that it brings</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">without the entropy of springs</span></span></span><br />
<br />
<br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">we can leap up to the sky</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">casting off the weight of death and birth</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">and years that pass, the curvature of earth</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">can fall beneath us as we fly.</span></span></span><br />
<br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">but</span></span></span><br />
<br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">close your eyes and feel the shadows turn</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">and night will find you there upon the chaise</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">helpless to the years that churn</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">and turn your body into clay.</span></span></span><br />
<br />
<br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">Look out the window now, across the lawn</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">across the brook across the moonlight’s chill</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">and cast away your fear of dawn</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">your premonition of the daylight</span></span></span><br />
<br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">crashes</span></span></span><br />
<br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">Twelve groups of children gather on the hill</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">and burn the moon to ashes.</span></span></span>]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font"><span style="font-weight: bold;" class="mycode_b">The Clockmaker's Joy</span></span></span></span><br />
<br />
<br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">In the heat that’s dry and white like hay</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">the intolerable bright</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">of summer’s day</span></span></span><br />
<br />
<br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">and you - a sundial trapped within it</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">I beckon you to come away</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">and slip the minute.</span></span></span><br />
<br />
<br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">Without the metronomic gears</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">to click away the passing years</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">without the ticking panic that it brings</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">without the entropy of springs</span></span></span><br />
<br />
<br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">we can leap up to the sky</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">casting off the weight of death and birth</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">and years that pass, the curvature of earth</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">can fall beneath us as we fly.</span></span></span><br />
<br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">but</span></span></span><br />
<br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">close your eyes and feel the shadows turn</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">and night will find you there upon the chaise</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">helpless to the years that churn</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">and turn your body into clay.</span></span></span><br />
<br />
<br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">Look out the window now, across the lawn</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">across the brook across the moonlight’s chill</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">and cast away your fear of dawn</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">your premonition of the daylight</span></span></span><br />
<br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">crashes</span></span></span><br />
<br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">Twelve groups of children gather on the hill</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #000000;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif;" class="mycode_font">and burn the moon to ashes.</span></span></span>]]></content:encoded>
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			<title><![CDATA[Fresh Snow (title updated)]]></title>
			<link>https://www.pigpenpoetry.com/thread-27168.html</link>
			<pubDate>Wed, 25 Feb 2026 06:38:42 +0000</pubDate>
			<dc:creator><![CDATA[<a href="https://www.pigpenpoetry.com/member.php?action=profile&uid=9556">jonvandalen</a>]]></dc:creator>
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			<description><![CDATA[Another revision (think this is the last, for now)<br />
<br />
<span style="font-weight: bold;" class="mycode_b">Fresh snow </span><br />
<br />
You set out over fresh snow <br />
in the not-yet-morning. <br />
The silent hemlocks stood aside. <br />
Powder crumbled underfoot.<br />
<br />
Under a crowd of waiting stars,<br />
you left the house sleeping. <br />
Father remained in a dark window, <br />
dim birds pecking at the sill. <br />
<br />
Your breath ghosted the darkness <br />
before you.<br />
<br />
Behind you, nothing—<br />
save the sound of snow <br />
giving way.<br />
<br />
<br />
<br />
--<br />
<br />
A revision:<br />
<br />
You wandered over fresh snow<br />
in the not-yet-morning,<br />
past the stark pines along the road,<br />
white powder crunching underfoot.<br />
<br />
The stars burned bright and hard.<br />
The house behind you slept and slept.<br />
Father remained in a dark window,<br />
while sooty birds gathered at the sill.<br />
<br />
Your steps kept time on the road.<br />
Nothing followed, save the sound<br />
of snow giving way and a crow<br />
calling, from where you could not tell.<br />
<br />
<br />
—— original<br />
<br />
You moved over fresh snow<br />
in that not-yet-morning,<br />
past the stark pines along the road,<br />
powder crunching underfoot.<br />
The stars burning hard.<br />
The house behind you slept.<br />
Father slept behind a dark window.<br />
Your steps kept time in the night.<br />
Your breath drifted cold, ahead of you.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[Another revision (think this is the last, for now)<br />
<br />
<span style="font-weight: bold;" class="mycode_b">Fresh snow </span><br />
<br />
You set out over fresh snow <br />
in the not-yet-morning. <br />
The silent hemlocks stood aside. <br />
Powder crumbled underfoot.<br />
<br />
Under a crowd of waiting stars,<br />
you left the house sleeping. <br />
Father remained in a dark window, <br />
dim birds pecking at the sill. <br />
<br />
Your breath ghosted the darkness <br />
before you.<br />
<br />
Behind you, nothing—<br />
save the sound of snow <br />
giving way.<br />
<br />
<br />
<br />
--<br />
<br />
A revision:<br />
<br />
You wandered over fresh snow<br />
in the not-yet-morning,<br />
past the stark pines along the road,<br />
white powder crunching underfoot.<br />
<br />
The stars burned bright and hard.<br />
The house behind you slept and slept.<br />
Father remained in a dark window,<br />
while sooty birds gathered at the sill.<br />
<br />
Your steps kept time on the road.<br />
Nothing followed, save the sound<br />
of snow giving way and a crow<br />
calling, from where you could not tell.<br />
<br />
<br />
—— original<br />
<br />
You moved over fresh snow<br />
in that not-yet-morning,<br />
past the stark pines along the road,<br />
powder crunching underfoot.<br />
The stars burning hard.<br />
The house behind you slept.<br />
Father slept behind a dark window.<br />
Your steps kept time in the night.<br />
Your breath drifted cold, ahead of you.]]></content:encoded>
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			<title><![CDATA[by part]]></title>
			<link>https://www.pigpenpoetry.com/thread-27161.html</link>
			<pubDate>Mon, 23 Feb 2026 01:52:13 +0000</pubDate>
			<dc:creator><![CDATA[<a href="https://www.pigpenpoetry.com/member.php?action=profile&uid=10104">Mic</a>]]></dc:creator>
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			<description><![CDATA[I took an eyeball,<br />
hopeful friend,<br />
opened lash-shuttered iris<br />
and found nothing inside.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[I took an eyeball,<br />
hopeful friend,<br />
opened lash-shuttered iris<br />
and found nothing inside.]]></content:encoded>
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			<title><![CDATA[What Reckless Dreams]]></title>
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			<pubDate>Wed, 18 Feb 2026 15:29:11 +0000</pubDate>
			<dc:creator><![CDATA[<a href="https://www.pigpenpoetry.com/member.php?action=profile&uid=9556">jonvandalen</a>]]></dc:creator>
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			<description><![CDATA[What far-away land now beckons?<br />
What beauty? What danger?<br />
What subtle hope still lives?<br />
We are well past such dreams as these.<br />
Yet, upon a moment where dreams still plead for survival<br />
And hope makes a desperate move to be seen,<br />
Who will go? Who will try?<br />
Who will believe, and then act?<br />
What new beast shall be born when we, at last,<br />
Full of passionate intensity, follow our reckless dreams to the stars?]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[What far-away land now beckons?<br />
What beauty? What danger?<br />
What subtle hope still lives?<br />
We are well past such dreams as these.<br />
Yet, upon a moment where dreams still plead for survival<br />
And hope makes a desperate move to be seen,<br />
Who will go? Who will try?<br />
Who will believe, and then act?<br />
What new beast shall be born when we, at last,<br />
Full of passionate intensity, follow our reckless dreams to the stars?]]></content:encoded>
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			<title><![CDATA[Leaving Footprints (title change) edit]]></title>
			<link>https://www.pigpenpoetry.com/thread-27134.html</link>
			<pubDate>Fri, 13 Feb 2026 12:04:59 +0000</pubDate>
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			<description><![CDATA[<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">Leaving Footprints edit 2 (duke, milo)</span></span></span><br />
<br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">Our hilly roads are named for trees and groves,</span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">they skirt the shady coves and wind beneath</span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">an old-growth canopy of woven boughs.</span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">Hickories, Walnuts, Northern Oaks disperse </span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">a nutty carpet mixed with autumn leaves,</span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">their trunks so wide our arms can’t reach around </span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">their girth, they stretch their massive branches towards</span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">the gleaming lake to drink reflected light; </span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">but when they threaten rooftops from above</span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">they're chainsawed down, becoming firewood.</span></span></span><br />
<br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">The Yellow Poplars (nicknamed tulip trees)</span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">bear springtime flowers large as tangerines</span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">with golden petals orange at their base;</span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">they hang above our heads, not visible  </span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">until dislodged, descending fully formed.</span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">Attached by hollow stems to muddy roots,</span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">proliferating lily pads provide</span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">a stage for turtles, frogs and dragonflies.</span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">Leaves multiply, encouraged by the gush</span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">of runoff drained from winter-salted roads,</span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">the heralds of the water weeds to come.</span></span></span><br />
<br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">To grow our veggies dockside's ill-advised, </span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">the poisoned planks will leach preservatives </span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">that taint surrounding soil. It’s fine to plant</span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">some alliums for springtime color’s sake, </span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">some cheerful daffodils and hyacinths </span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">but edibles would drink up arsenic.</span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">We navigate the still-clear spring-fed lake </span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">and ask each other: “Wonder where the rich</span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size">folk are today?” and revel in our luck.</span></span></span><br />
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<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">Leaving </span></span><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">Footprints    edit 1.1(duke, milo)</span></span></span><br />
<br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">Our hilly roads are named for trees and groves,</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">they skirt the shady coves and wind beneath</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">an old-growth canopy of woven boughs.</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">The stately Hickories and Northern Oaks </span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">lay down a nutty carpet every fall.</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">With trunks so wide my arms can’t reach around </span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">their girth, they stretch their massive branches towards</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">the gleaming lake to drink reflected light;        </span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">but when they threaten rooftops from above</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">they're chainsawed down, becoming firewood.</span></span></span><br />
<br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">The Yellow Poplars (nicknamed tulip trees)</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">bear springtime flowers large as tangerines</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">with golden petals orange at their base;</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">they hang above our heads, not visible  </span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">until dislodged, descending fully formed.</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">Attached by hollow stems to muddy roots,</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">proliferating lily pads provide</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">a stage for turtles, frogs and dragonflies.</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">Leaves multiply, encouraged by the gush</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">of runoff drained from winter-salted roads,</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">the heralds of the water weeds to come.</span></span></span><br />
<br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">To grow our veggies dockside's ill-advised, </span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">the poisoned planks will leach preservatives </span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">that taint surrounding soil. It’s fine to plant</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">some alliums for springtime color’s sake, </span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">some cheerful daffodils and hyacinths </span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">but edibles would drink up arsenic.</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">We navigate the still-clear spring-fed lake </span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">and ask each other: “Wonder where the rich</span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">folk are today?” and revel in our luck.</span></span></span><br />
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<br />
Heavy Footprint Stomp<br />
<br />
To undertake a garden dockside's ill-<br />
advised, the poisoned planks are bound to leach<br />
preservatives that taint surrounding soil.<br />
The alliums for April’s flowers' sake, <br />
the daffodils and hyacinths are fine <br />
but vegetables would drink up arsenic.<br />
Attached by hollow stems to muddy roots<br />
proliferating lily pads provide<br />
a stage for turtles, frogs and dragonflies;<br />
they multiply encouraged by the gush<br />
of runoff drained from winter salted roads,<br />
the heralds of the choking weeds to come.<br />
<br />
Our hilly roads are named for trees and groves,<br />
for coves and inlets nestled under old-<br />
growth canopies, the interlocking boughs<br />
suspended over cabins built below.<br />
The yellow poplars (nicknamed tulip trees)<br />
bear springtime flowers large as tangerines<br />
with golden petals orange at their base,<br />
the blooms on branches high above our view <br />
until dislodged by squirrels, landing fully formed.<br />
Their trunks are wider than my arms can reach<br />
around, two hundred year old hickories <br />
and oaks dispense their bounty every fall.<br />
They lean their limbs out towards the sparkling lake<br />
attempting to absorb reflected sun<br />
but when they threaten rooftops underneath<br />
they're chainsawed down, transformed to firewood.<br />
<br />
We navigate the still clear spring-fed lake<br />
and ask each other: Wonder where the rich<br />
folk are today; we know our luck is prime<br />
but carve our precious assets to our whims<br />
and chip away at what we value most.<br />
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">Leaving Footprints edit 2 (duke, milo)</span></span></span><br />
<br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">Our hilly roads are named for trees and groves,</span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">they skirt the shady coves and wind beneath</span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">an old-growth canopy of woven boughs.</span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">Hickories, Walnuts, Northern Oaks disperse </span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">a nutty carpet mixed with autumn leaves,</span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">their trunks so wide our arms can’t reach around </span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">their girth, they stretch their massive branches towards</span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">the gleaming lake to drink reflected light; </span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">but when they threaten rooftops from above</span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">they're chainsawed down, becoming firewood.</span></span></span><br />
<br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">The Yellow Poplars (nicknamed tulip trees)</span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">bear springtime flowers large as tangerines</span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">with golden petals orange at their base;</span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">they hang above our heads, not visible  </span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">until dislodged, descending fully formed.</span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">Attached by hollow stems to muddy roots,</span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">proliferating lily pads provide</span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">a stage for turtles, frogs and dragonflies.</span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">Leaves multiply, encouraged by the gush</span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">of runoff drained from winter-salted roads,</span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">the heralds of the water weeds to come.</span></span></span><br />
<br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">To grow our veggies dockside's ill-advised, </span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">the poisoned planks will leach preservatives </span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">that taint surrounding soil. It’s fine to plant</span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">some alliums for springtime color’s sake, </span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">some cheerful daffodils and hyacinths </span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">but edibles would drink up arsenic.</span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">We navigate the still-clear spring-fed lake </span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">and ask each other: “Wonder where the rich</span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font"><span style="font-size: medium;" class="mycode_size">folk are today?” and revel in our luck.</span></span></span><br />
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<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">Leaving </span></span><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">Footprints    edit 1.1(duke, milo)</span></span></span><br />
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<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">Our hilly roads are named for trees and groves,</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">they skirt the shady coves and wind beneath</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">an old-growth canopy of woven boughs.</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">The stately Hickories and Northern Oaks </span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">lay down a nutty carpet every fall.</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">With trunks so wide my arms can’t reach around </span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">their girth, they stretch their massive branches towards</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">the gleaming lake to drink reflected light;        </span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">but when they threaten rooftops from above</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">they're chainsawed down, becoming firewood.</span></span></span><br />
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<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">The Yellow Poplars (nicknamed tulip trees)</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">bear springtime flowers large as tangerines</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">with golden petals orange at their base;</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">they hang above our heads, not visible  </span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">until dislodged, descending fully formed.</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">Attached by hollow stems to muddy roots,</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">proliferating lily pads provide</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">a stage for turtles, frogs and dragonflies.</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">Leaves multiply, encouraged by the gush</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">of runoff drained from winter-salted roads,</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">the heralds of the water weeds to come.</span></span></span><br />
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<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">To grow our veggies dockside's ill-advised, </span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">the poisoned planks will leach preservatives </span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">that taint surrounding soil. It’s fine to plant</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">some alliums for springtime color’s sake, </span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">some cheerful daffodils and hyacinths </span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">but edibles would drink up arsenic.</span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">We navigate the still-clear spring-fed lake </span></span></span><br />
<span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">and ask each other: “Wonder where the rich</span></span></span><br />
<span style="color: #454545;" class="mycode_color"><span style="font-size: small;" class="mycode_size"><span style="font-family: Helvetica Neue;" class="mycode_font">folk are today?” and revel in our luck.</span></span></span><br />
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Heavy Footprint Stomp<br />
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To undertake a garden dockside's ill-<br />
advised, the poisoned planks are bound to leach<br />
preservatives that taint surrounding soil.<br />
The alliums for April’s flowers' sake, <br />
the daffodils and hyacinths are fine <br />
but vegetables would drink up arsenic.<br />
Attached by hollow stems to muddy roots<br />
proliferating lily pads provide<br />
a stage for turtles, frogs and dragonflies;<br />
they multiply encouraged by the gush<br />
of runoff drained from winter salted roads,<br />
the heralds of the choking weeds to come.<br />
<br />
Our hilly roads are named for trees and groves,<br />
for coves and inlets nestled under old-<br />
growth canopies, the interlocking boughs<br />
suspended over cabins built below.<br />
The yellow poplars (nicknamed tulip trees)<br />
bear springtime flowers large as tangerines<br />
with golden petals orange at their base,<br />
the blooms on branches high above our view <br />
until dislodged by squirrels, landing fully formed.<br />
Their trunks are wider than my arms can reach<br />
around, two hundred year old hickories <br />
and oaks dispense their bounty every fall.<br />
They lean their limbs out towards the sparkling lake<br />
attempting to absorb reflected sun<br />
but when they threaten rooftops underneath<br />
they're chainsawed down, transformed to firewood.<br />
<br />
We navigate the still clear spring-fed lake<br />
and ask each other: Wonder where the rich<br />
folk are today; we know our luck is prime<br />
but carve our precious assets to our whims<br />
and chip away at what we value most.<br />
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			<description><![CDATA[<span style="font-weight: bold;" class="mycode_b">I have the rest of my life to try</span><br />
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I’m not good at cooking, <br />
But I am at hoping <br />
That the cuttings of onions <br />
In half-full mugs <br />
Will come back to <br />
Give me another chance.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<span style="font-weight: bold;" class="mycode_b">I have the rest of my life to try</span><br />
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I’m not good at cooking, <br />
But I am at hoping <br />
That the cuttings of onions <br />
In half-full mugs <br />
Will come back to <br />
Give me another chance.]]></content:encoded>
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