2nd Annual Poems About Suicide Month
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(02-18-2015, 01:24 AM)ellajam Wrote:  
(02-18-2015, 01:06 AM)ChristopherSea Wrote:  
(02-17-2015, 11:39 PM)tectak Wrote:  ....apart from that it's just the "and".Not worth killing yourself over.
Best,
Tom
What about:

Urine-sane

Outside a piss yellow asylum,
suicide taints the sunflowers-
alas, the ochre canvases
that could have been.
That makes a big difference to me, I like it.
Yup.
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2nd Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by Todd - 02-16-2015, 10:01 PM
RE: 2nd Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by pinkalligator - 09-15-2016, 01:01 PM
RE: 2nd Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by just mercedes - 02-17-2015, 07:32 AM
RE: 2nd Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by just mercedes - 02-17-2015, 08:04 AM
RE: 2nd Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by tectak - 02-18-2015, 01:36 AM
RE: 2nd Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by just mercedes - 04-28-2016, 09:43 AM



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