2nd Annual Poems About Suicide Month
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(02-17-2015, 11:39 PM)tectak Wrote:  
(02-17-2015, 10:30 PM)ChristopherSea Wrote:  Urine-sane

Outside a piss yellow asylum,
suicide taints the sunflowers-
and ocher canvases other or ochre?Gotcher!
that could have been.
....apart from that it's just the "and".Not worth killing yourself over.
Best,
Tom
What about:

Urine-sane

Outside a piss yellow asylum,
suicide taints the sunflowers-
alas, the ochre canvases
that could have been.
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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2nd Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by Todd - 02-16-2015, 10:01 PM
RE: 2nd Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by pinkalligator - 09-15-2016, 01:01 PM
RE: 2nd Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by just mercedes - 02-17-2015, 07:32 AM
RE: 2nd Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by just mercedes - 02-17-2015, 08:04 AM
RE: 2nd Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by ChristopherSea - 02-18-2015, 01:06 AM
RE: 2nd Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by just mercedes - 04-28-2016, 09:43 AM



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