The Disappearance
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TranquillityBase,

I notice that this lacks that " rhythmic" quality Dylan Thomas speak of in your sig line. Other than that, this seems a fine nonsense poem.

best,

dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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The Disappearance - by TranquillityBase - 06-04-2021, 09:29 PM
RE: The Disappearance - by dukealien - 06-04-2021, 10:51 PM
RE: The Disappearance - by Erthona - 06-16-2021, 05:43 AM
RE: The Disappearance - by TranquillityBase - 06-17-2021, 02:57 PM
RE: The Disappearance - by Thunderembargo - 06-18-2021, 01:19 AM



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