Ozymandias
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Thanks for the comments and giving it a read. The flower bed is symbolic of the person's riches. It is written in iambs; three four foot line (iambic tetrameter) and one line of trimeter for emphasis. I guess it didn't work so well as I hoped.

best,

dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Ozymandias - by Erthona - 05-09-2021, 11:15 AM
RE: Ozymandias - by TranquillityBase - 05-09-2021, 11:43 PM
RE: Ozymandias - by Majestic Sun - 05-10-2021, 10:33 AM
RE: Ozymandias - by Erthona - 05-10-2021, 02:04 PM
RE: Ozymandias - by Knot - 05-10-2021, 09:09 PM
RE: Ozymandias - by Erthona - 05-13-2021, 06:37 PM
RE: Ozymandias - by Knot - 05-13-2021, 07:30 PM
RE: Ozymandias - by Erthona - 05-19-2021, 12:21 PM
RE: Ozymandias - by dukealien - 05-20-2021, 07:59 AM
RE: Ozymandias - by RiverNotch - 05-21-2021, 02:28 AM
RE: Ozymandias - by Erthona - 06-15-2021, 03:11 PM



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