05-10-2021, 10:29 AM
(05-09-2021, 10:49 AM)TranquillityBase Wrote:What do you mean something more relevant?(05-09-2021, 08:24 AM)Majestic Sun Wrote: I thought I made the ending clear, is it about whether or not I should work in a church?I guess I meant specifically a different last line:
So I continue to squabble with my dilemma
like a broom without a handle.
Strictly throwing that out as an example. I'm sure you can come up with something more relevant to your poem.