The Primitive Church
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(05-09-2021, 04:30 AM)Majestic Sun Wrote:  Working at church would be a blessing.
And I don’t mean as a way to God.
I’d rather work long hours as a sweeper.
But with no pay, why should I do it?
I feel that passion is the key to working.
Once I was at the entrance of the cathedral,
the place was pale yellow and brown
with several crosses on the top.
The woman, an Abesha, asked me if I
wanted the job, I said sure but I thought
why not work somewhere else?
But being blessed my God would startle
my soul, but would I go to heaven easier?
Let it be known that becoming a servant
to God takes years, so I assume
this job would come hard.
But the unholy me wants to disappear
like a genie in a musical, let that be known  into a bottle 
that I want to work somewhere else.
 
But if I were to work somewhere else
would I be side swiping the job like it were  this was
Tinder? I think life blesses me anyway.
So, I wouldn’t need to work in a church.
So I continue to squabble with my dilemma...............
Must I work in a church?
Majestic, some minor suggestions.  The ........... is because I think you need a better ending.  You need to let the reader know how this ends.


Messages In This Thread
The Primitive Church - by Majestic Sun - 05-09-2021, 04:30 AM
RE: The Primitive Church - by TranquillityBase - 05-09-2021, 07:44 AM
RE: The Primitive Church - by Majestic Sun - 05-09-2021, 08:24 AM
RE: The Primitive Church - by TranquillityBase - 05-09-2021, 10:49 AM
RE: The Primitive Church - by Majestic Sun - 05-10-2021, 10:29 AM
RE: The Primitive Church - by CRNDLSM - 05-09-2021, 10:28 AM
RE: The Primitive Church - by TranquillityBase - 05-10-2021, 09:51 PM
RE: The Primitive Church - by Majestic Sun - 05-11-2021, 05:19 AM
RE: The Primitive Church - by TranquillityBase - 05-11-2021, 05:27 AM
RE: The Primitive Church - by newmystic - 05-15-2021, 03:04 AM
RE: The Primitive Church - by Majestic Sun - 05-15-2021, 03:59 AM
RE: The Primitive Church - by Majestic Sun - 05-15-2021, 07:10 AM



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