Lullaby
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Hey Knot-

You may comment however you wish, as this is MISC. 

I will not take any offense, though I will not attempt anymore changes to this piece: it has become a favorite "child" of mine.

I invite you to attempt a variation of your own.

Mark



(04-01-2021, 11:57 PM)Knot Wrote:  
(04-01-2021, 10:36 PM)Mark A Becker Wrote:   so that I'm not tempted to ever mess with it again.
I'll keep my mouth shut then ... but oh, the temptation! Smile

Best, Knot

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Poe never came to my mind as I worked through this one, Duke, but it certainly became an apparition over the years.


(04-02-2021, 12:08 AM)dukealien Wrote:  Wow.  Aside from being good in itself, it reminds me oddly of Poe - the way his lines were sometimes almost total rhymes, or seemed to be.
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Messages In This Thread
Lullaby - by Mark A Becker - 04-01-2021, 10:36 PM
RE: Lullaby - by Knot - 04-01-2021, 11:57 PM
RE: Lullaby - by Mark A Becker - 04-02-2021, 12:14 AM
RE: Lullaby - by dukealien - 04-02-2021, 12:08 AM
RE: Lullaby - by newsclippings - 04-04-2021, 02:34 PM



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