Hey Knot-

You may comment however you wish, as this is MISC. 

I will not take any offense, though I will not attempt anymore changes to this piece: it has become a favorite "child" of mine.

I invite you to attempt a variation of your own.


(04-01-2021, 11:57 PM)Knot Wrote:  
(04-01-2021, 10:36 PM)Mark A Becker Wrote:   so that I'm not tempted to ever mess with it again.
I'll keep my mouth shut then ... but oh, the temptation! Smile

Best, Knot


Poe never came to my mind as I worked through this one, Duke, but it certainly became an apparition over the years.

(04-02-2021, 12:08 AM)dukealien Wrote:  Wow.  Aside from being good in itself, it reminds me oddly of Poe - the way his lines were sometimes almost total rhymes, or seemed to be.

Messages In This Thread
Lullaby - by Mark A Becker - 04-01-2021, 10:36 PM
RE: Lullaby - by Knot - 04-01-2021, 11:57 PM
RE: Lullaby - by Mark A Becker - 04-02-2021, 12:14 AM
RE: Lullaby - by dukealien - 04-02-2021, 12:08 AM
RE: Lullaby - by newsclippings - 04-04-2021, 02:34 PM

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