Bushwalk
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Hi Busker, I trip over the word "somewhere" everytime I read this otherwise very fine poem.  It's such a vague interjection, and the rest of the poem is so concrete.

that's all I got
“All persons, living or dead, are entirely coincidental.”  Kurt Vonnegut
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Bushwalk - by busker - 03-02-2021, 07:24 AM
RE: Bushwalk - by TranquillityBase - 03-03-2021, 10:21 PM



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